Reviews for evening sky extravaganza
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
I love these two so much! I haven't thought about them as a pairing in a while, to be honest, but as I was going through the forum I figured that I'd take a look at it. I love the idea of Angelina as Demi's trainer, since Demi joined the team after Angelina left. 'Because no matter how badly the others sucked' - that kind of made me chuckle, haha. The Gryffindor Quidditch team has had some issues...I like the hint of Demi/Ginny, too, because even though I prefer Angelina/Demelza I do have a soft spot for her with Ginny, too. 'Raven-haired hellfire' is a lovely description for Angelina, especially on the Quidditch field - that's just brilliant. As always with your freeverses, your formatting is beautiful, and I love how on words like 'up' and 'around' you actually sort of show the word with formatting, it's a wonderful touch. Beautiful, mew!
Morghen chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
This was great!

The flow was perfect as was the stylizing! It was nice to read, but also to see, which really makes a good freeverse.

The Quidditch theme put a nice touch on the pairing. I could picture Angelina becoming Demelza's personal trainer and then it turning into something more. I wonder what Ginny thought of that, since she was the one who wanted Demelza to start playing Quidditch...


The description of Angelina as 'hellfire' is perfect!


Great work, as always!

lowi chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
I LOVED this mew! It was really cool, you made them fit perfectly together! And the descriptions, and how quidditch had such a big part in it, it was really wonderful - all of it!
Queen of Stuff chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Even though Demi/Ginny is the bestbest thing in the whole wide world, I have to say that I REALLY FREAKING LOVED THIS.