|Reviews for Quarrels and Kisses|
| qwertzuiop4 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
1) Wrong order of events. First Percy comes back, then Fred gets killed.
a)There is no evidence that Ron really hates Percy.
b)The whole family accepts Percy's "apology" - and he only apologises for acting like an a**hole, neither his siblings nor his parents care for his political opinion.
3) Nobody (i.e. "real life" persons) would ever think of continuing a petty quarrel between siblings "in the face of mortal danger and almost certain death" (Capt. ).
| Isob3l chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Cute. Really cute.
| RushingHeart chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Very good potential, but could've been longer/more detailed. The grammar is a bit off too. Other than that, great story (: