Reviews for Quarrels and Kisses
qwertzuiop4 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
1) Wrong order of events. First Percy comes back, then Fred gets killed.

2) OOC.

a)There is no evidence that Ron really hates Percy.

b)The whole family accepts Percy's "apology" - and he only apologises for acting like an a**hole, neither his siblings nor his parents care for his political opinion.

3) Nobody (i.e. "real life" persons) would ever think of continuing a petty quarrel between siblings "in the face of mortal danger and almost certain death" (Capt. ).
Isob3l chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Cute. Really cute.
RushingHeart chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Very good potential, but could've been longer/more detailed. The grammar is a bit off too. Other than that, great story (: