Reviews for The Dawn of a New Day
Delove18 chapter 15 . 2/13
I love the concept of your story. The only issue I have with it is that it is riddled with a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. Which makes it very hard to read. I'll advise that you get someone to proof read your work. But apart from that, good job.
kirsty21 chapter 21 . 11/15/2016
cool
animeloveranimegunner chapter 21 . 10/24/2016
Plz update soon
fanfic madhorse chapter 21 . 5/28/2016
omg it should be a boy and you shoud update tomorrow
babesbraves chapter 21 . 5/10/2016
Just found your story and I loved it! It's 4am here and I just finished reading the book so far I hope you update soon as it's a amazing read.
Lil.Pantera chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Who is Ian?
Shinigami Clara chapter 4 . 12/28/2015
... You might want to change that sentence "just deal with the harpy first" lol Harry the harpy saying that about Bella, intending it to be an insult is a little... Yah XD
V1X3N93 chapter 3 . 11/11/2015
What did Luna say? Sorry I don't speak French and love the story so far
sjrodgers23 chapter 21 . 10/28/2015
please come back and update this story it was just getting good thank you
Princess Jupiter Dash chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
Hey I really like this story but I'm a little confused on who this Ian guy is. I was hoping you could tell me? I mean are Harry, Draco, Neville, and Luna using fake names cuz from the way you wrote it I couldn't tell
Guest chapter 21 . 2/16/2015
:)
Kittens Kat chapter 21 . 12/16/2014
LOOOOOOOOVED IT! TWINS OR TRIPLETS MIGHT BE GOOD AS A SORT OF SURPRISE FOR THE NEW PARENTS TO BE! THANK YOU!
ram chapter 21 . 11/30/2014
More please? Harry should have twin girls
gurlygenes chapter 21 . 10/20/2014
TWINS! I love twins! :P I love this story and hope to see another update soon!
dljxxx chapter 11 . 10/12/2014
Hmm I was enjoying this at first, the characters all seemed head strong & now they're all really meek! I understand harry being submissive in a relationship but you have wrote him a whole different personality from how it began
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