|Reviews for Journey|
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/25
Please update! This is so amazing! Also you ended on a cliff hanger. That's just cruel
| JasmineDragon22 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Dude you totally left it hanging gotta finish!
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/11/2013
Please update your story, I really like it. It's the best Rashel/Quin story I've read.
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/14/2013
When are you going to update this? This is such an amazing story! Update soon, I defenitley want to read more Rashel and Quinn stuff. :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/18/2013
Your writing technique is great. I hate finding a story I think is gonna be good and it has terrible grammar and spelling. Great story line, too. Thanks :)
| thelovelymystery chapter 16 . 4/30/2013
I absolutely loved this story. I really hope you decide to continue it!
| WonderYears chapter 16 . 3/17/2013
Like I said before its still really good. The writing. I want to know where they go on to now, and Yeah. Update?
| WonderYears chapter 14 . 3/17/2013
Ok. I love this story to death. It's cute, and up until this point, it's been really amazing. Your quite the writer there. Buut I'm going to choose to review this chapter specifically.
Like I said - fab writing and all. But the characters seemed kind of off for this part. I know This couple is serious but they still have emotions, no? I thought the sex came in too soon. I figure her virginity would be a bit more sentimental to her, and That Quinn would respect it. It was good, but this was a part where I thought they were kind of OOC. Like, to put it abruptly, he f*cked her, he didn't, like, "love" her. She just seemed like another Anja to him. Sex is a big step for any couple but it should be an especially large step for this couple. It Does change things and all. It should be Special. And how they did it wasn't special or meaningful. This would have been good for their third or fourth time but not for the first. First-time should be special because it changes things. I think Quinn would be more gentle, and she more shy. They don't have that lovey-dovey type of relationship, but they still love each other. It was too aggressive, fast, and indifferent. Like he doesnt love her, only what she could offer him, and Rashel was too quick and easy to give herself up.
I'm just putting instructive story is still top-notch, Dont get me wrong. It's just this one part that I had a downfall in.
| zalmx'z 1ArX aLeXanDrX chapter 16 . 3/12/2013
omg amazing :)
| JasmineDragon22 chapter 16 . 3/1/2013
Love this series, love this couple, and this story rocks :) great job i can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
Please write more. I love your writing style. :)
| SillyFairyGirl chapter 16 . 2/8/2013
Oh, wow! I just started reading this not long ago, and I must say that you're extremely talented. Your writing is so wonderful. I love this couple, as well. My second favorite Night World pairing. I can't wait to see more of what you write. Keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
not trying to sound like a smartass or a dumpass but didnt she die after he became a vampire...how would he feel the suffer of her dying when she was alive when he was made a vampire...idk lol i just finised that book and it was amazing and thank you for making this story its realllly on point as if the author was writing it herselfs tanx :))))))
| sweetfury chapter 16 . 12/28/2012
This story continues to amaze me, I absolutely love it. Especially this chapter, despite how unsettling it was. I love the suspense :3
| Denfehlath chapter 16 . 12/24/2012
This chapter was exciting, and I really liked reading from Quinn's POV. You write so good! I can't get over how much details you put into your work and how in-character they are. I liked this chapter because it was exciting, and it introduced things that I really look forward to. I really want to see how Quinn tells his soulmate what he did, and how she reacts.
Update as soon as you can please :)