Reviews for Yellow Ribbon
Guest chapter 11 . 3/25
this is very great. Incredible. thank you so much for writing
kittyKat010 chapter 11 . 1/25
The feels of this story is unbelivable. The pain and sorrow is just... I cant find words for it. Really Great story
sukkazii chapter 11 . 12/7/2015
I really love your story. It's one of my favorites.
child of Jon snow chapter 11 . 3/30/2015
I was crying most to the time and the last chap had my happy crying
Triscribe chapter 11 . 2/23/2015
Oh. My. Goodness.
I've read a lot of horrible things the Decepticons have done, but your (absolutely original) idea has blown me away as the most despicable thing ever. I. Freakin'. Loved this!
And the ending-! Beautiful. Just beautiful. :)
2211Nighthawk chapter 11 . 12/9/2014
I've been browsing thought your fanfictions lately, (I'm running out of good new ones so time to go back to my favorites) and this is my favorite one so far. The whole thing was just amazingly written and I loved it. The rec room scene with Prowl, Jazz, and smokey stuck out the most just because of how descriptive it was. the same with how Ratchet, then Prime reacted to finally remembering everything. The whole thing was just amazing. Wow. The emotions ran wild in this and just turned it into a tear jerker. Just... Wow. Don't know what else to say.
FuziPenguin chapter 11 . 8/25/2014
This was great! I was as tense as Prowl and Jazz during the chapters in which the rest of the Ark was adjusting to their presence. Thanks for a great read!
Irrwisch chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
"For all that his nemesis lay before him, body torn and spark slowly fading, he knew that there was only one broken mech in this room.
It wasn't Prowl."

That was amazing. Thank you for writing and posting this story.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/5/2014
This is amazing, one of the few things that have brought me to tears because it not only had perfect characterization but a unique, interesting plot. Good job and I hope to read more fics by you in the future :)
Guest chapter 11 . 2/2/2014
This was amazing! :D ...did I completely skim past Elita finding out they were alive?
tanithlipsky chapter 11 . 1/1/2014
Sunstreaker's Girl chapter 11 . 7/29/2013
Yet another fine piece of writting. I loved reading this fic.
kkcliffy chapter 11 . 7/16/2013
I have just finished reading this story for the second time and just have tosay that it is just as wonderful the next time through! I couldn't put it down during either reading. Great job!
Infinitechange chapter 11 . 5/25/2013
Very interesting and fun story!
DarkShell chapter 11 . 5/22/2013
That was a very well written story with an exceptionally original plot! You've managed to keep a steady pace during the whole time with a healthy dose of drama and suspence, then you've ended it in a very believable way. The emotional parts were also just the right dose - not too rushed or too sappy. It must have been a challenge to write all that body language, but it has turned out great.
Right, I'll go check out your other stories now :D Good luck on future projects!
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