|Reviews for I'll Be There|
| Mikochan chapter 20 . 2/3/2013
I love so much this story it had made me cry (TT_TT ) Yes, I am being a little emotional but I really totally completely enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. That's a wonder ! Oh, and I noticed that the way you're writing is quite special, with a lot of repetitions and all, I like your style :D
Well anyway, very good story ;-)
| Dreadful Virtue chapter 20 . 12/30/2011
haha awwwww sweet story. x3
| AntiGravitation chapter 20 . 10/27/2011
I enjoyed this story. Though I almost shouted a flame at you for ch.19. I was so freaking out for the idea of sexual abuse (I hate it). But thank God, you didn't intend to go further (to hurt Seifer, and Squall) T_T
I do like this kind of plot. Just surprised that you made Squall top! WOW! Bossy Squally! ROFL
Ya know, at first I didn't want to read the story because of the genre is Romance/Angst, with the "angst" at the end, and without "comfort" mentioned. However, I was so desperate for any new Seifer/Squall fanfics. So I decided to check the last chapter and found it has a happy ending. Voila, I finally have the guts to read it :P
Hey, um, I wonder.. uh.. I know that you planned to write a sequel. But, uh.. can you write an extra chapter in a one-shot story where Squall willingly to be taken by Seifer? *Gosh I'm blushing hard sheepishly for this request*
PS: In case you didn't notice, you had flipped "then" for "than" a lot at this writing. Good luck for your new writing!
| Good Ol' Fashion Cola chapter 20 . 10/16/2011
love it. I agree, if you're making a sequel I wouldn't mind that at all. *winks*
Thanks for a great story!
| L and misa for eternity chapter 20 . 10/12/2011
i liked this chapter it was a good one to end this story i so enjoyed read this story i love it you did a great job on it is there gonna be a seqel to it i would love to read more of it
| ZombieRachelLOVESZombieQuinn chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I love this story
| Good Ol' Fashion Cola chapter 19 . 8/7/2011
Good chapter! And you're sweet but you really don't have to give me any credit at all for the idea. It was nothing and you wrote a whole chapter so all the credit goes to you!
Hope the writers block will quickly dissapear. Good luck and keep it up.
| L and misa for eternity chapter 19 . 8/6/2011
This was a pretty good chapter. Jared is so terrible! He was really going to rape seifer. I'm just glade squall found him in time. That Jared is a major dick and he's so sick and twisted. i think he got what he deserves. at least Squall got his revenge. It sure kepted me at the edge of my seat. great job on it.
| BlizzardAngel chapter 19 . 8/6/2011
it was good and that other guy that was with jared is so going to get it from squall. the idea isn't bad. I would try to not make it seem like seifer is such a weakling. I mean, if he is taller than squall, is he really skinny? You portray him as fragile. I'm thinking i should reverse their roles and make squall w huge muscles and seifer to be the one that's a little scrawny. I think that seifer can hold his own for a while. I know 2 or even 3 against one is obviously one sided but when seifer was hitting back I don't think jared would be able to get his pants/shirt off, I think jared should have grabbed his head and knocked it back against the ground(like squall did to jared) to really make it seem like seifer couldn't fight back anymore. Otherwise, good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
| Risika Kiisu Seto chapter 18 . 8/4/2011
Dude, that gril doesnt get it until you spell it out for her. Honestly. Go squall! Break the blabbering baboon of a bitch! :D
aw, so cute! SquallxSeifer moments warm my heart. I cant wait to read the next chap! Love the story! You rock my sox off, girl!
| Good Ol' Fashion Cola chapter 18 . 8/4/2011
Of course, I enjoyed seeing Seifer blushing like a little school girl. It's so out of character and cute! But if you have writers block maybe I can help you out. I always have a few ideas and maybe my ideas will give you some new inspiration for the story! *smiles*
I'll sent you a message later! *hugs*
| BlizzardAngel chapter 18 . 8/4/2011
Oh it was sooo fluffy and a little glad we didn't see jared. however rinoa was obnoxious but squall was awesome! loved it and what did i say? no writers block! you're not allowed! lol, thanks for the update and i sooooo look forward to your next chappy. also, sorry about my last review, when i review from my phone, i do it so quickly(cause i'm at work) and i didn't realize that i swyped the wrong words lol. my bad!
| L and misa for eternity chapter 18 . 8/4/2011
LOL that was so funny how squall put rinoa in her place like that. she is such a annoying bitch. its like when will she get it that squall is not interested in her and never will be. squall and seifer are so cute together great job on another chapter. i''ll be waiting for the nexted one
| Good Ol' Fashion Cola chapter 17 . 8/3/2011
Jared is a dumbass. And needs to realize that he is gay. Good chapter. Keep it up!
| L and misa for eternity chapter 17 . 8/3/2011
jared sure is a posessive bastard and yet he claims to not be gay he's in deep deneil. he's terrible talking about seifer that way. i mean how stupid can you be talking shit about someone when their boyfriend is standing right there and is mad as hell. hes such a asshole he deserves a lot worse then being beat up. i love this stories it surprises me all the time. can't wait for the nexted chapter