Reviews for The Eagle and The Sparrow
Guest chapter 11 . 12/26/2012
I hate that Edward has a child with another woman than Bella. His soul is forever joined with Angela in their child. In this life and in the next. He will never belong only to Bella now.
summerleigh81 chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
I can appreciate the third person pov, but I think it would feel less 'all over the place' if it was in one person's pov, especially with shorter chapters. Can't wait to read more though.
summerleigh81 chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Interesting first chapter...
KimiD chapter 11 . 1/29/2012
And everyone lived happily ever after... HEA
KimiD chapter 10 . 1/29/2012
Sorry, sorry sorry, about the wtf words... he was just so mean to Bella and that was not acceptable when she had done nothing wrong. I love that you could elicit such strong emotions from me for your Bella~~ That is Great writing~ And to make me made at Edward, not easily done... Nicely Written~~ And I can really handle that he was protective of his daughter, understandable... but not if it had been another woman, which is what I thought to start with, like he was playing her while f***ing another woman waiting for her to decide ~that would have been tooo much. Nice twist about Jake being Angela's brother, did not see that one coming at all, cuz I Was wondering how Jake would know, it was almost as though He had betrayed Bella... nice plot twists throughout... Great Writing~~
KimiD chapter 7 . 1/29/2012
wondering when the dog was gonna come into the picture...

Again, WTF... he does not love her, not treating her like that, family or not... you DO NOT treat someone you supposedly love like that. Again, he's an asswipe and Bella did not deserve Any of how he treated her... and I don't blame her for leaving~ but not jacob, go home to dad or go to mom but Not jake...
KimiD chapter 6 . 1/29/2012
WTF ~ This has something to do with the call she got and they hung up on her... and whoever it was is wreaking havoc and Edward is believing it... stupid, stupid man... now try getting Bella to believe you or anyhting you have to say... asswipe~!~!
KimiD chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
Aha, knew he would stop, let her know he wanted More... and then goes to Em for his blessing, boy, the man is serious... he Knows Em will kick his ass if he hurts Bella...

Wonder who the phone call is...
KimiD chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
Hmmm, maybe he stops her because he does not want her to feel like she is just another conquest... or he's thinking maybe this is not a good idea because she is Em's sister, who know, lets get to the next chappy and see...
KimiD chapter 3 . 1/29/2012
*Huge Ass Smile* love that james got his comuppance... LOL And that Bella gave him a good bit of it! Wow, seem Edward is a bit of an ass to tanya, not that I care, but wow... How is it if him and Em have been friends for so long that he never met Bella...? Just curious~

And how is it that he see "the girl" if she is with the guys' girls? Interesting...
nondescript user chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
Ooh, who are his friends, and what are they going to do to james?
nondescript user chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Very interesting first chapter! I like the way you've set everything up so far. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
KimiD chapter 2 . 10/5/2011
wow, this chapter gave me chills... nicely done. I was wondering when he was going lash out at her. Nice knowing how Em met Rose and I always LOVE when Em is Bells big brother... Great 2nd chapter. And I love Em going after james. Hee hee, take that asshat... LOL
KimiD chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
This is kind of a different scenario... Bella says she's not happy but is she afraid of james and that's why she doesn't leave? Or does he have her so brainwashed that she really does not believe she can do better. Interesting questions, I shall be looking for the answers. Like this so far. BTW Candance rec'd your story, said you were her pre-reader. KimiD
A is for Angel chapter 11 . 9/29/2011
thank you for writing such an amazing story and i defintely cant wait for more from you
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