Reviews for Kekoa
Magos186 chapter 12 . 2/6
Lol. Love it. The last line is priceless. This whole story rocked.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/29/2017
Well that wouldn't of actually been allowed to happen so this was not focused on steves as a seal but about the team digging in to HIS NAVY mission and then going in as if they were seals when they are not and would get arrested for that
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2017
They shouldn't be digging in to were steves going they have not been told for a reason how bout they do their damn jobs and let steve do his
Guest chapter 12 . 6/27/2017
Not bad classified mission but 5 0 knew about it in order to grt out and help on a mission they shouldn't of known about and wouldn't of been allowed to be involved in as they are NOT seals
rosayago65 chapter 12 . 1/24/2017
I found this story and read it in one day. You're a great writer. I love Steve in SEAL mode but I do love him with the child. Love the last line. I know you wrote the story some years ago and it's a bit late for posting a review but I had to do it just tell you how much I enjoyed the whole plot and the way you write. Awesome!
gabobbi chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Great, truly GREAT story..
Skimball4 chapter 12 . 4/18/2015
Loved the last line! I have been binge reading all of your stories just like I've binge watched all 5 seasons of the show. Please keep are a great writer!
weemcg33 chapter 12 . 4/13/2015
Lmao, loved that last line. This was truly amazing, and I'm totally shocked that Steve wasn't injured once throughout but it had plenty of action and fluff where little Ali was concerned. Awesome story!
CelicaChick chapter 12 . 12/29/2014
Best action story ever! The relationships I the story was beyond words. I loved every word of this story!
iboneki chapter 12 . 12/5/2014
Oh, man, I need more recalled!SEAL!Steve in my life. Also savingkids!Steve. This is a gem.
lafemmefantome chapter 12 . 11/12/2013
This story was just priceless. I've been working my way through your stories and simply put, you've done an excellent job. I really wish you would consider self-publishing a collection of them. Maybe a fanzine of sorts? Just a thought :-)
steverfan chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Great SEAL story for Steve,and he is fantastic with the litlle girl. Enjoyed your story ,felt like I was in the jungle with the team.
HeartsDragon chapter 12 . 8/16/2012
Brilliant story! I love Steve with kids he's adorable! Ali was so cute throughout the story and the ending was fantastic! :)
loveRnB chapter 12 . 2/23/2012
this story had everything, Had me mad and sad and that list lline had my laughing. thank you
Kilema chapter 12 . 2/19/2012
Just found this story. WOW. I read it in one day, it was sooooooooo

good. :)
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