Reviews for Better for All the World
Stupid computer chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Congratulations, you just made me cry. This is really good and I love how Doof is portrayed in this.
Marissa Flynn chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Awwwwwwww that's soliloquy adorable!
Jamie Chiasson chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Your ending made me miss my real parents.I also cried a little bit.
skullandcrossstitch chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
...:CCCCCC "Doof-is-Phineas's-dad" fic done right. And also heartbreakingly. Fantastic job - I like how it acknowledges Doof saying he'd never seen her again, and it still works. But also dammit my tear ducts are not even getting paid overtime, stop making them work so hard.
Forever a mystry chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
God, now you made me cry! Okay, I've been shaking as I read this! It's really good! You can stop here, but if it was my decision, keep going. You've got adoring fans out there! I absolutely changed my thinking about Doofenshmirtz and O.W.C.A. I love how Perry kept the note secret. it started to make me cry, and shake harder. This story moved me. Whether to tears or made me have to take a quick break to catch my breath, you'll have to guess. (Hint: it's the first one) Amazing job! I'm still lost in thought! Outstanding job! Now excuse me, I have to teach a lesson to Johnny about when you mess with Ferbessa, my true favorite couple for now! EVIL GRIN TIME! Please update, if you feel compelled. Otherwise, fantastic story!
Doof's biggest fan chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Also PLEASE continue! I'M BEGGING YOU! Please!
Doof's biggest fan chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
AWWWWWWW! A had to go for lunch, when I was at the part when Doof's saying goodbye to Phineas, as I get in the car,one of my siblings asked if I was okay. They asked this because my heart was thumping and I had chills from this story(and that stuff didn't stop till about five minutes later! YA! LOVE IT! Amazing! Doof is (as you can tell by my screen name*for this category*) my favorite character! I liked how Perry let the note slide, it was sweet! Loved this! Good job!
Secret Agent G chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Interesting spin on the show! It was very well written, and you handled the point of view excellently. I like how Perry didn't turn the note in, that was sweet. _

All in all, excellent story!
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
nice keep going its good
Lacrimas-Aeon chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
W.O.W! I loved the story! Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaase write another chapter! PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE?

Any-who... If you do write more, please do it soon. If you don't hurry, I might EXPLODE from the suspense. (And I Don't think my mom would like to sweep up my confetti/ashes.




Well, either way, I loved it and hopr to see (or rather read) more of this story!

Okay then! Ja-Ne


annea101 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
this makes a lot of sense really they do look alike
Galaxina-the-Seedrian chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
This was so...*sniff* beautiful...

Hm, in retrospect that would explain why Phineas' nose is so pointy. And that would explain why Linda dated Dr. Doof before...

...wait a second...

Linda Dr. Doof Phineas...and Candace? O_O

Hm...maybe the neck thing replaces the nose thing...none the less, this story makes sense. Great job!XD
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Each show on has about one or two stories that surpass the rest and make u never look at the show the same way again. This (and Dimentional Drift: Siblings and superpowers) is that story :)

Also, for wizards of waverly place that story would be Memories. It's more than 100,000 words and will remain unfinished forever, but it still left a big impression in my mind. All I can say is that I swear if u never write another chapter, and just keep it at this, the story u wrote will still leave that O-0 impression in my mind (Don't take that in the way that I'm saying it's ok to not update, because if u don't update then the O.W.C.A. will storm into your house and erase your memories :) lol jk but I'm getting a feeling this is only a one-shot, but it's a PERFECT plot to continue!)
the sudoku kid chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I can't believe how sweet this little story is, it's absolutely amazing. Thanks for writing it, keep up the good work.
InuFaiya chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Esta guapissimo, en serio esta genial.

Siempre he pensado que Phineas y Doofens tenian que tener un tipo de parentesco (me resultaba demasiado curioso todo), pero aun y así esta genial.

Aquí tienes una fan con ganas de saber mas.

PD: Lo leo gracias al traductor de google así que puede ser que algun comentario no lo entienda bien pero aun y así me encanta la intoria (por si habia quedado claro) XD
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