Yeah, this author is a complete retard. What the hell was that scene with kunai throwing exam? You want me to believe the proctor tried to kill Naruto? That he would be so damn fucking retarded to not realize if he did that he would get executed? That a chunin level ninja would be so damn stupid as to try killing jinchuuriki?

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Honestly I don't think I can see any chemistry between Naruto and Temari. idk maybe because I could see Temari's chemistry with Shikamaru from the start. they say usually someone looks for someone who can complete him. for example, if a man is stubborn then he is more suited to a woman who is gentle. from what I see you describe is that they are the same as each other. similar in appearance (blonde), similar in chakra affinity (wind), and other similarities. and honestly I don't understand the idea that people who have things in common will get along.

salty kakashi lol

People who actually pay attention this was written before the end of Shippuden so Kurama and the other bijus didn't have names.

Pathetic why the heck would you waste your blood clone on a children match instead of using it to get rid of the person that originally planned the invasion?!

Why the heck would you let him walk around and alert the enemy which could lead to them getting rid of more of your allies later on?!

Why the heck would you go back to your old teachers if they failed you so much in not changing things?!

Pathetic why the heck didn’t you bring a healing jutsu beforehand or have a plan to stop the way she got killed originally?!

Weren’t you planning to save one of the current enemies?!

Why the heck didn’t you make a similar bet if you didn’t want to be tortured?!

Why the heck would you teach your techniques to random people if they are very likely to just run off and tell every enemy of yours the details?!

Why the heck are you suddenly bringing random books into the story and ruining all natural progression?!

Why the heck couldn’t you have just forced someone else to teach you genjutsu especially if you are in a future where you are one of the strongest and where there are hidden scrolls everywhere?!

This is one of those stories where it comes across like the author is so desperate to not make it seem like he's overpowering the character that they ignore basic logic to nerf things. The characters seem stupid for not doing basic things they should be able to and it ultimately makes the author look worse, especially on top of weird stuff like Naruto randomly not having Kurama when he goes back in time. At that point why not just go all out and make him an OC?