Lol! Ohhh this best chapter from 14 chapter! Haha

U jave not been reading manga properly~ Hinata has two releases : believe it or not, she has fire style and lightning style

I HATE SASUKE UCHIHA THAT DAMN PRICK. RIH SASUKE UCHIHA. REST IN HELL. Oh Naruto, rest in peace!

Great job

her affinity is water

Hinata has both

enjoying the story but the amount of times I've cringed from horrible grammar, or just totally wrong word choice has reached critical levels.

pm me if you need a beta (you need a beta)

tHIS IS one of the best damn Naruto stories I have read in a LONG time. please continue it. Keep up the great work. PS. Shukaku showing up... now?!

What the hell Is with him now lol he Sound or look like a pervert or something but LOL.

this story needs some work. it feels half assed.

ASUMA YOU IDIOT! If you did a 360 degree turn, you END UP RIGHT BACK WHERE YOU STARTED!

Oh man I got an erection just by reading this

Story is good , very good but i dont like the fact why every writer plays as per cannon as sakura even though she is weak and a bitch always gets her way with others by hitting them insulting the

Story is good , very good but i dont like the fact why every writer plays as per cannon as sakura even though she is weak and a bitch always gets her way with others by hitting them insulting them and cant take a single insult herself and naruto just laughs like an idiot.

So, any plans on coming back to this story, or are you gone from this site for good? Just wondering, as it's rare to find a Naruto time-travel fic where he doesn't immediately(or close to it) blurt out that he's from the future to SOMEONE. The fact that he's managed to keep the secret this long is quite impressive, and adds a few new angles for the story.