Reviews for Fun in the Sun
Minako Mikoto chapter 1 . 2/14
LOL That was great! And SO like Murphy too! :P
nerdsdoitbetter chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
hehe. cute! I could hear the accents perfectly! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
It's a fun story. My critiques are... To be a little more discriptive. When murp is yelling, how is he yelling? what is he yelling? Lastly, unless he's doing a John Wayne impression I don't think murph is going to be saying "over yonder".
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
aww i loved this! seriously, i'm like smiling from ear-to-ear. this is def. my new favorite movie, and this one of my new favorite fanfictions :)
hotstep122 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
BohemianRebel chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
I really like this short little story, because I can really imagine the brothers saying the things you made them say, something that I think is really important for a good story. The dialogue is completely believable!

Love it!
Crow22 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
love it
DJFireHawk chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
LMAO...I can totally see the boys doing that. Especially mischievous Murphy. Excellent job.
AerynSpeedleCaine chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Very, very cute story. I truly enjoyed it.
xPoppyx chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I was rolling! This was so funny and perfect! I could totally see the brothers having a water fight :P
TwilightBrightStar chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
YOU POSTED IT! I loved it. I am happy...