|Reviews for The Precious Book|
| StarrySkies21 chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
:[ Aww I can't believe they killed Lucy :[ Now how is Sweeney Todd suppose to find his long lost wife :[ ,,, other than that good chapter
| StarrySkies21 chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Awww poor Harry and Lucy :[ I love the chapter you amazing :]
| StarrySkies21 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I just started reading it, but I can tell that I'm going to love it 3 My heart goes out to little Harry :[
| Srienia chapter 20 . 6/22/2012
I understand your frustration as I myself are a fan of and follow many m rated stories. However FF is a free service with minimal advertising. They have made no secret of that MA worthy stories should be kept on other sites. I do not see a black out as a beneficial move in any way.
Regarding the removal of stories; they have already started the purge and I think it started in the beginning of June. One of my favourite stories were removed at that time (the author kindly sent it to me afterwards).
I agree that it should be different and believe that this will probably keep some authors from making this their main posting site which is a shame considering the categorization and sorting options. Still, it is a free service...
| drarrypotter94 chapter 19 . 5/28/2012
Very good so far please update soon :)
| 107602 chapter 19 . 5/6/2012
Thank you for this entire story so far. The brother/friend relationship between Harry and Draco is super cute and I can't wait to see if it grows into something more in the future. I wonder if Harry will be able to stay with Malfoy or Snape this summer. See you next update. :)
| Srienia chapter 19 . 5/6/2012
I want try to hurt - won't
obvious to the world - oblivious
obvious to the small - oblivious
flowers oh all things - of
Though it might because - might be
It was a nice chapter and I'm looking forward to their continued conversation .
I'm happy that you found my previous review helpful
| Srienia chapter 18 . 4/15/2012
I must admit even if I didn't particularly enjoy the first few chapters they were well written, building nicely up to the main plotline while at the same time having relevant subplots. I especially enjoyed the difference between 6 yeat old who met Lucy and the one who flipped at Malkin's. It was great when he started reciting the poem
it was a major surprise when he was sorted to Slytherin, I'd have thought Albus would have rigged that too. Then again his plans haven't exactly been following schedule. I had been quite nervous regarding who he would befriend after the missed appointment at Malkin's and Hermione just turning up in the train. luckily you already went au there
I so adored his stutter. Usually I get tired of reading the typography for stuttering, but the story kept me captured ensuring it was endearing.
I was a little disappointed in Draco when he left the table with his father's letter initially, but brightened considerably up when reading of Dumbledore's satisfied smirk: confident that Draco would see through such a ploy. Very disappointed that it took Draco 2 _weeks_ to come to start talking to Harry again. Personal time and being selfish is necessary every once in a while, but weeks T-T
I like that Harry starts out small with his confidence; first a couple of glares then he stands up for himself against the troll and later an actual person. It is nice to see the slow development.
it was brilliant that the book was burned and the following consequences. It was a bit strange that he wasn't brought to the hospital wing for any of this though. I hope that the garden will be good for him and that he'll form a tentative friendship with Neville.
The light banter between Draco and Snape was amusing and gives something extra to your portrayal of Snape. Particular the fact that Narcissa was drawn into the banter rooted him more firmly in the godfather role, which I often find is only portrayed through favouritism.
I'm happy that Ron is being manipulated. Not that I mind Ron bashing, but his behavior was a bit over the top, especially compared to that other characters were more logical and believable.
What a twist of tale, I guess I was a bit simple minded and just thought it was Dumbledore behind Weasley's extreme reactions. Hadn't guessed it would be Quirrel. And then the next loop came when he started to manipulate Hermione though magic as well (seems like the obvious explanation to why her doubts suddenly disappeared)
Now I'm curious, will this eventually be slash Drarry? The terms little brother and big brother are fine for now, but it has me kind of doubting if it will evolve to more.
It is not to be petulantly childish reviewer, I genuinely love your story and it is easy and entertaining to read. I know that not all authors appreciate the following type of corrections, if your one of those just skip the rest review; it'll only annoy you .
defiantly Gryffindor - definitely ch7
Draco latter - later ch7
reveling his - revealing ch8
would process you - possess ch9
leave and mot - not ch9
Transfiguration is actually is - an is too much ch9
and look at the - looked ch9
potion off the potion - cauldron off the fire? ch10
this pass month - past ch12
tater clothes - tattered ch12
did!" she - unfinished sentence ch12
"I hope it hadn't found - conflicting tenses either hope/hasn't or hoped/hadn't ch12
defiantly need to - definitely ch12
able to fight in - fit in ch13
his face sweated - very strange construction. Suggestions face covered in sweat/gleaming with sweat/sweat covered face/gleaming face ch13
face was full of anger and malicious - consider reversing or paraphrasing. suggestions: face was malicious and full of anger/face was full of anger and malice ch14
Hermione was relief - Hermione's was full of relief/Hermione was relieved ch14
she was relief - relieved ch14
She was lightening up on how much she watches him, sometimes forgetting to, but somehow Harry felt that today she will - inconsistent tenses: is/watches/will OR was/watched/would ch14
again, obvious - oblivious ch15
Draco, have how is Brat? - delete 'have' or complete the sentence
shock and become - can ch15
obvious to everything - oblivious ch15
away, be cannot - but couldn't ch16
very must true - much. ch16
when I have - when I did ch17
may be the fact that she has - tense may have been/she had ch17
better then you - than ch17
Class pasted by - passed ch17
, I'll as Pomona - ask ch18
even won the - win ch18
students so enthuse - enthusiastic ch18
enthuse to gardening - about gardening ch18
I know it may seem a lot, but it really isn't compared to how much you've written. As I said feel free to ignore this .
I'm so looking forward to the next installment.
PS: the review was written on my phone so auto-correct may have changed some words .
| xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 18 . 4/15/2012
I hate that man!
| ryouXichigo-lover chapter 17 . 4/3/2012
:) love it
| Chishio Ame chapter 17 . 4/1/2012
Ah the sheer stupidity of 11 year olds...I so wanted to smack Hermione...even at 11 she should have enough common sense to see the flaw in logic when stating that Harry should be in the House his parents are in just because his parents were in it if he didn't grow up with them...
| nelsa chapter 16 . 3/2/2012
I have cried more while reading this story then my entire job!
| Silvermane1 chapter 16 . 2/24/2012
maybe harry should talk to luna
| xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 16 . 2/24/2012
I feel so bad for Harry!
| Ilamay chapter 16 . 2/24/2012
i love it! Thanks for writing it. :)