Reviews for Luck
bugglover chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Its a very cute short story and I want you to continue it! I really like the flow of this story, its very fluid. Don't like the beginning though (first word). Keep up the good work, Bugglover
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
That was a cute short story, good one!
the cantarella of odile chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Hey, I thought this was really cute and well-written! They'd make a cute couple, I have to admit~ I really think you should continue it, though. *Walks into a wall on the way out*

~Odile
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
The pairing & your story are interesting.
dewdrop6 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
" sorry for not finishing it, hit the submit button by mistake

This is seriously my favorite crack shipping of all cracks, make a 2nd chapter and ill be the happiest person ever! this shipping needs more 3!

critisism- well it could be longer and Platina would have reconized the famous "Gold" as a Dexholder but oh well

yeah Gold was a smidge out of character i imagined him to be more playboy like XD MAKE MORE!

PS. this is the longest review ive ever submitted so congratulations! :D
dewdrop6 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
YESSSS!