Reviews for Icha Icha Succedaneum
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
Wow ! That was really nice writing !
I'm shocked how can this story can this little reviews! Its so much better than other story I have read !
NaRcIsSiStIcAlLy In LoVe chapter 1 . 1/19
this story has me floored. I've been reading it slowly favouring every bit and piece there is. I like how you made her strong in voicing her thoughts and not so shy. I've seen a lot where they make her to be inexperienced and it's a bit off putting. so this for me is refreshing. It's also very original, something a lot of fics lack lately. I'm trying to think of any constructive criticism I have to input but I have naught to say about it. I'm certainly in love with this fic, that's for sure. You made her everything I imagined Sakura to be if her character was given more depth. So for now all I can say is keep it up
emmanon chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
This is one of the most original stories I've seen for Naruto and everything just flowed so wonderfully! None of the characters were OOC and there was great substance and good smut. Great story and writing.
AliceCambio chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
I liked it a lot. There were lots of cute and funny moments.
Caeria chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Funny and hot. Always a good combo. Thanks for the read.
MystikalFaery chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Ohh one of my favorites to read over and over! Thank you, once again, for the wonderful KakaSaku fic! You never disappoint! Or I should say, you never cease to amaze!
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
I thoroughly enjoyed this! Loved how you tied Kakashi and Sakura's story into the book she wrote - I can see why Kakashi would protest against it, and why Sakura would react in response. Love the tension in here, and the breathless intimacy between them. Very in-character.

Also loved the intimate scene (especially Sakura's impatience ;) ) I liked the flow and cadence of it, and how it was so desperate and sensual.

Other parts that stood out were the little bits like Kakashi trying to fit Sakura and porn in the same sentence, and hitting himself with the book. I like how you ended this too - tentative but hopeful.

thank you for writing and sharing! Definitely a worthwhile read ;)
Amrun chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Cute premise. I loved them fighting in the beginning.
rebecca chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Whoa. Well written.
Bella chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Lovely huggs
redstipulations chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I loved it. Thank you:D
jro08 chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I love this pairing the most. I like how you developed Sakura's feelings though the Icha Icha book. There was still a lightness to it as well. Thank you for the great story.
anon500 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Such a beautiful one shot. Well done and thoughtful.
TheSilverMirror chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Cool. I never realized that such a pairing could potentially work out until I read this fic. 14 years isn't really that long of a time-span when you consider human sexuality. Males typically become sexually mature at a later age than females anyway. Thus, from a biological standpoint, marrying/dating older men makes sense for humans.

In this situation, after reading this piece, I kind of realize that for a group in this sort of situation, the sexual tension probably increases dramatically once the adrenaline rush is gone. Kakashi's group since the beginning of the show goes through lots of things. Sakura likely had to obtain emotional support from someone. Naruto at the time was always bouncing around from one end of the globe to the next, trying to solve problems, gaining skills and making a name for himself. In that time period, it would make sense if Kakashi had to act as her mentor in a lot of ways, thus creating a situation that (no Sasuke, Sai's suspicious since he's associated with Root)...

I find the topic you explore in this piece, about women and popular myths concerning women and consumerism of erotic literature interesting as well. Modern day erotic art often focuses solely on male interests, and not only that, male perverse interests to the exclusion of the feminine side of sexuality.

(I could practically do a dissertation on this, although I think someone might have done such a thing already)

Anyway. Loved the story. You're a good writer. _
ChibiCHICKENluver chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
this was so good omfg. i can't even describe my love for this
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