|Reviews for Kiseki|
| Bookworm51485 chapter 25 . 11/6/2014
I wanted to see Gaara :'( Disappointed that this chapter skipped so far ahead and then it's the end. I wanted more.
| bookworm51485 chapter 12 . 11/4/2014
You get me and I feel duped. I was actually really excited that finally an author had written a baby boy into a story. They're ALWAYS girls these days and I hate the way people change their writing when you introduce a baby girl. It's interesting, it almost never happens with baby boys, but with girls it becomes all about the little princess and cutesy-wootsie. It's a bit nauseating. I'm hoping that because it's Sasuke and Naruto and we're dealing with shinobi and kunoichi, that we won't have that shift in writing style. Still was excited for a boy though. I went into expecting a girl, but when you said boy my excitement rose and then I was disappointed. I would have really preferred that it just be unknown rather than getting my hopes up...
Also, I found it interesting that you mentioned sensitive nipples but the idea of lactation never came up. Sensitivity is the result of the body preparing itself to lactate. That would have been an interesting thing to come up.
On a more technical note, you probably could have used a second beta. There are a lot of things that your beta misses, things that are pretty noticeable, that kind of trip up the fluidity of the story. They're understandable considering the fact that English isn't your first language, but a good beta should have caught those things. Other than those technical things, it's a good story, definitely VERY entertaining. And your little oc is adorable and very likable. Not very many people can write likable oc's as major characters, so kudos on that.
| bookworm51485 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Based on the epilogue of the last story, shouldn't Naruto be hokage? Or am I confused on timing? I wasn't sure exactly where the epilogue fell in relation to this story
| buterflypuss chapter 25 . 9/30/2014
| xShinigamixMPx chapter 25 . 9/21/2014
Awww this was a wonderful ending ;3 It's been a while since I read this story though so I think I'm going to have to go through it again to refresh my memory :D It may take a while because this is seriously one long fic! I don't know how you managed it, but congrats to finally finishing it :3 and Kodomotachi too! I will forever remember these fics ;D x
| Midnight Essence chapter 25 . 9/21/2014
Awww. I did get a little attached to the OCs though so I understand, and there was the best place. I look forward to seeing whatever you put out next, but until then, Ja ne
| Midnight Essence chapter 24 . 8/9/2014
I love this and you have to come back seriously.
I need you here
| Alina of the Valley chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Who is pregnant Naruto or Sasuke
| Alina of the Valley chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
why is naruto a fox?
| Inuyashas bloody moon chapter 24 . 7/6/2014
What a great story. Please update.
| Melyway chapter 24 . 6/9/2014
I just love Naruto's pregnant belly! It's so sexy!
| Meehalla chapter 24 . 5/18/2014
Hawww sasuke is really a nice father. I love him like that. Addicted to naruto and a sexy father. I hope you will continue to post.
| TKM chapter 24 . 5/16/2014
Thank you for great chapter.
| amaromarn chapter 24 . 5/16/2014
I forgot about this story thanks for the new chapter
| Melyway chapter 24 . 5/15/2014
More! More! And longer chapter too. Naruto's round pregnant belly is so sexy.