Reviews for Primary Mechanisms |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2024 please can you continue with the story |
Lynbow2343 chapter 1 . 9/13/2024 I've reread this story so many times! I remember getting excited seeing the update emails. I miss this story. Author I hope your doing well! Thank you for this masterpiece! |
elitabumbles chapter 118 . 7/13/2024 It's been just over ten years since the author last updated this fanfic... I still come back and read it occasionally haha! I first read this story back when I was sixteen, now I'm twenty three . Soooooo much has changed but this story has been a nice constant to go back and re-read occasionally. If the author still reads these reviews... I hope you are doing well! And thank you for creating this story. |
WirelessDown chapter 13 . 6/15/2024 The worst part and main criticism of this fic is that the author completely forgets about distances and geography. The NEST base is located on the lonely island of Diego Garcia. This is the Indian Ocean. Teresa's family lives in the USA. You can’t just get there in a couple of hours, not to mention the fact that you’ll have to fly instead of drive. Sam studied in Europe, Bumblebee seemed to remain in the USA or returned to the NEST base. In order to organize a meeting between Optimus and Sam, people are needed, in particular transport aviation and the bureaucracy. And in this small detail we are shown that NEST is not just a group that uses Autobots to fight the Decepticons, but also responds to their requests, and also tries to satisfy requests depending on their expediency. |
Guest chapter 118 . 6/6/2024 Soooo does it have Sunny? And thx for what you have written btw. |
Estrella-Dorada chapter 118 . 5/29/2024 Does anyone know what happened to the author of this fic? Did she just lose inspiration and stop writing or... did something bad happen to her? I hope someone picks this up and finishes it one day, it's a very good story and it will be sad if it remains unfinished :'( |
Anonymous chapter 118 . 4/14/2024 Hey, your story is incredible! I’m a big fan! Can you pleeeaaseeee finish it? You promised… |
I fucked your mother chapter 118 . 3/18/2024 Get you bitchass back here and keep on updating it asshole |
DannieLawman1995 chapter 40 . 9/29/2023 Weird cause that vehicle is supposed to be Cybertronian, right? I've read this before, and I'm sure I'm right. But if that's the case, why didn't Ironhide know or say something? |
GrandMasterPreast chapter 118 . 6/20/2023 I remember reading this story 10 years ago and falling in love with it. I've had a lot happen to me in the last 3 months... my dad died while I was in the house with him... my siblings have been fighting over the whole situation and have decided to never see each other again, and I hold my family as close to my heart as Tess does hers so it has absolutely destroyed me. I got very sick and lost my job because of it just last week, but then I remembered this story existed and I came back to read it again and it was exactly what I needed to be a distraction. As a writer myself I know how you can fall away from writing a story you otherwise said you would never abandon because lord knows I've done it plenty times myself... all I want to say, if you still have access to your account and still read these, is THANK YOU! This story has helped me through the hardest time of my life, and while I wish you would come back to it, I wish even more that you are ok, and that everything in your life is going alright. 3 |
Appollymi chapter 74 . 6/20/2023 Don’t you dare stop me writing! Point me in the direction and I will gladly shovel said stupid reviewer I to a whole so deep, even the Army and their technology won’t be able to find them. NEVER, and I mean NEVER let a negative response impact your creative juices my love. You should always take them with a grain of salt; accept that some people are just different (ahem, assholes with nothing better to do in their lives, ahem), fix any mistakes you see and move on. Cause there is always five cheerleaders to one negative Nancy. And I’m one of themI have been GLUED to this story since I found it a couple days ago and I am beyond BEEFED with my job for getting in the way of letting me read this story. Like fucking hell, I don’t need money. Hahaha Please please continue to finish this lovely story; I am very much anxious to see if the decepticons will find out about her, how they’ll use her against Optimus, will there be more action (this is a ME thing, not a you thing. I love romance but I love action romance too hehehe), how will the Autobots react to her being in the war, what about spark mating and how that’ll go, and mikaela and bee -will there be something there too …? Gah! Excuse me while I call in sick to work for the next couple days so I can read uninterrupted. |
DannieLawman1995 chapter 83 . 4/23/2023 I'm just wondering, in regards to your 'family issues', did you ever wonder why she ran away? Clearly there was a good reason. How old was she? If she was an adult, then she has the right to do whatever she wanted. You call her bf a dumbass. Can you go more into depth as to why? Is he actually dumb? Do you just not like him? Or is he an actual asshole? If it's because you simply don't like him then again, I'm not surprised she left. While I don't know people like this personally, I have read about people who go on about their feelings etc when someone does something with their lives that they don't like. But the truth is, it's not about you or what you feel. It's about her. It's about her life and her doing what she feels is best/right for her. Have you spoken to her properly as an adult about all of this? How has she 'broken all your hearts' by leaving (as everyone does in the end) to be with someone she may love somewhere else? To have her own life with him? Doing that doesn't 'rip families apart'. Only those that don't like the choice end up ripping their family apart. To be honest, by what little you've written about it, it doesn't sound like she needs forgiveness from anyone. I'm just saying. |
dreamgrl95 chapter 118 . 3/25/2023 It’s been almost ten years, and I still reread this story. I love it so much and I often wonder what will happen next, but I hope the author is ok and doing well. |
Anonymous0ne chapter 12 . 3/13/2023 Love the story, the moments Tessa has with each of the ‘Bots. Ps. WHAT DID SHE DO TO HIM?! |
Anonymous0ne chapter 7 . 3/13/2023 Honestly, I wonder how she’ll take it when Prime dies |