Reviews for A Woman Scorned
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
rlrct chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
Got love the Mac-comeupance!
DorothyOz chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
LOL Loved it, the misunderstandings and how it all ended for Mac is funny...
joniskpelare chapter 5 . 9/21/2011
Very try and sadly for the show, very belivable.
joniskpelare chapter 5 . 8/2/2011
Def a punishment. Adad sounds misserable. Maybe J&H can get together later in a year or two.
byrhthelm chapter 5 . 8/2/2011
H'mmm... A very nice loose end there, right at... the end. So no slinky dresses for Mac... just a padded cell and then padded winter uniforms and fur trimmed parkas for the next five years. That should cool her blood!

Well done, mon gar!
Michi uk chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
Of course Harm will let another woman into his life, her name is Jen, glad Mac got her cumupance at last

Thanks viz Look forward to your next Michelle UK
carolfd chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
Another winner, Vid. Loved it!
Saissa chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
"He still didn't know why Mac had done what she had. She'd been jealous plenty of times before, what was it that had pushed her over the edge this time."

Harm, Harm, Harm

Havent you heard of the term - If I cant have you, then noone else can?

Mac viewed you as her personal posession and her stand by guy. She only wanted you when there was noone else available. In the meantime you were NOT given permission by Mac to date anyone else - at least not serious enough to fall in love.

Mac could see that you and Jen could easily fall in love because you were (are) living next door to each other. She probably already knew that Jen had a crush on Harm.

That is why she slapped you and treated you the way she did.
jojobevco chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
Glad to see Mac got some sort of punishment, yet sad that Harm and Jen are still having to deal with the fallout.

What was with the fridge and counter thing anyway? Or why does everyone think the Alutians are a punishment, I mean it is a tactically important location?
robertwnielsen chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
Not exactly what I would have expected (Article 32), but great nonetheless...especially throwing Mac into the nut ward for six months. XD (Not that she didn't *deserve* it). But, handling the whole mess as an Admiral's Mast rather than a full-fledged courts-martial was probably better. XD

Loved the "see the refrigerator and the counter next to it?" "Yes." "*That* close." exchange...that was great.

Wonderful way to end the story. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next. XD
Lynnp chapter 5 . 8/1/2011
Of course he's going to let a woman get close ever again, and her name will be Jen! I hope they manage to find a way through all the regs. Shame about Mac, but I'm afraid she had it coming. I completely agree with you about AJ, he did have something for Mac, and he let his heart rule over his head too often giving her chance after chance, but at least he was able to sort it out so that Harm and Jen didn't have anything official on their records. Great as always Vid!


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MATT29man chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
Finally the old SEAL is seeing the light! Took long enough! I hated how AJ was changed by the last seasons, no longer up to the task at hand and no longer willing to back his officer's plays! I was glad to see him retire after the last season. Can't wait to see the next exicting chapter! Post soon!
Les chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
Nice addition. I could almost see the admiral's eyes getting larger in my mind as Harm talked.
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