|Reviews for Happy LifeDay, Baby|
| Eregnar chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Aw... This is so sweet and hilarious! Great job!
| Stilwater Rundeepo chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Oh, wow...that was so cute! Imagining Anakin and clones surrounded by balloons and streamers and a banner for Ahsoka was hilarious. But you handled it well and didn't make it feel weird or random, and...I just loved it. Great ending, too!
I'm definitely reading this to every family member on their birthdays from now on...if you're OK with that, of course :)
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
LMAO this... well I have no way to describe it! It's awesome, anakin's reaction was what made it funny, and everything being gray and the cake white. _
| Dawn of Time chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This is so adorable! I could picture the clones setting the stuff up and being like "It has to match perfectly." -Stern Rex is stern- :D You gave them the feel of being so innocent and wanting to please. While we know Ahsoka's acting skills may not be the best (ahem, clone wars Slaves of the Republic episode. "Unhand me, brighand!"), she seemed to do reasonably well here. I wonder what's on the card... Please tell?
| Jess Marylin chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
That was really sweet of them. And like Ahsoka thought, I think it was really sweet of the boys. They did their best, the only way they knew how. Loved this!
| Roriko Kojima chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Awesome work! The entire time I was reading this I was smiling :D
| captainrexbest35 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
i couldn't help but laugh my guts out its awesome
| LongLiveTheClones chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This was priceless! I never would have thought of perfectly grey decorations. Too funny!
| SerendipityAEY chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I think I faintly remember that ep... I love that show! But it fits so perfectly here with the clones! Love when Anakin walks in and sees it all gray, so funny and I did not see it coming at all, but you painted a perfect picture.
Sheesh, Obi-Wan sounds a bit grumpy :( Hope the reason he's not at the party is that he's off somewhere being cheered up... hmmm...
Anyway, I think you got Anakin's tone perfectly, I could hear his voice throughout, great job with that. Is this your first time writing him? I've found I really enjoy writing his pov. Also, I loved how Ahsoka so effortlessly went along with it all; she was so sweet about it and knew just the right things to say. Love the moment between Anakin and Ahsoka :) what did that card say? ;) Great job.
| CC-RandomDragon chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Sorry, I'm not logged in and in a rush. I LUVs this oneshot, but what was on the holo-card? Is it some inside joke that I don't know, or is it a mystery? Thnkz! -CC
| outlaw hunter chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Oh that was excellent! It was really just too sweet! Everything being gray and the clones standing at attention for her party at first was hilarious. Have a nice life day and a Happy Birthday!
| sachariah chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I've read several "Ahsoka's birthday" one-shots, but nothing this plausible sounding, let alone humorous. This waa priceless!
Oh, Rex. They just don't cover this at Kamino, do they? Oh dear oh dear. I will say that I think Rex might have throw a little color in there, especially the cake - he does paint his armor, after all - but the gray "scheme" (it matched the walls), oh my, too funny.
And I loved Ahsoka's reaction (and Anakin's characreristic paranoia) to their 'surprise' - it was so sweet, and just like her. I'm dying to know just what was on the holocard, but that line (the orange blur) was awesome - it fits our little Togruta so well.
And I enjoyed how you managed to keep Rex oblivious to Anakin's fear - quite a feat, seeing that Rex sees through most of Anakin's acts (such as with Padme). And there was a touch of the Captain's friendship with Anakin that isn't dealt with often enough, IMO.
All around excellent! Thank you for sharing a piece of your own "Life Day" with us!
And, of course, happy birthday. :)
| Queen chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
That was ADORABLE!
Everything in grey! And you know they'd all try SO HARD and they were so close it was just priceless! Though there's something about it all being in grey...because it matched the walls, LOL. And the boys all standing at attention instead of jumping out with a 'surprise!' Though honestly, having a bunch of clones leaping around shouting 'surprise!' seems a little odd...honestly, though, this was really sweet as well as funny.
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!