|Reviews for You Deserved Better|
| Scraggles chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Stunning. Amidst all the death and sorrow, it's hard to say what caught me most off guard - the moderately happy ending, or Luna and her wrackspurts, haha. That being said, this is definitely one for the favorites. Kudos to you for making me chuckle and cry; keep writing!
| paperandink13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
This is SO going on my favorites! It made me cry and it made me laugh. Great job!
| ex-McAbbyGirl chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
wow, that was good...no i mean like really good! *puts in faves*
| ProlifeJesusFreakWriterGal chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
I love the end.
| adp1222 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
That just tore me up inside. I'm actually crying and that rarely happens from a story. It was so emotional. I hated that they killed Lavender in the movie. Great job
| Princess Grimm chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
That was one of the most touching Harry Potter one-shots I've ever read. Fabulous job, mate.
| TivalovercalledAbby.1997 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
awwww Hermones so sweet sometimes
| DramioneLurver chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
This was beautiful, so beautiful. I like the idea of Hermione feeling alone after the Battle was done; it strikes me as very realistic and in character for her. It was so sweet how she cleaned Lavender up as best she could. So sweet, so sad. Lovely work.
| The Codemeister chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I almost cried when i saw Lavender's lifeless body during the last movie. i didn't want her to die, but at least in the books her fate is still unknown.
| pinkpen23 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
OMG! This was so sweet! I was so sad when Lavender died. Very good job!
| Rose chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Oh Alice, this is just beautiful. There's two totally different emotions here- one in the beginning and end.
You did a wonderful job hunny. Keep up the good work!
| RedCloakedMaiden chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Very lovely! If Lavender did die in the Battle, I can't imagine anyone except Hermione taking care of her.