Reviews for Wildcard
Princess Hephzi of Arendale chapter 30 . 5/26
This was awesome! I was reading it with my duck earlier but my parents won't allow her on the bed. She's named Ahiru ( where on earth did I come up with that name for her?) She wasn't paying much attention though, she seemed more interested in what my hair tastes like...
Princess Hephzi of Arendale chapter 22 . 5/26
We writers are all as bad as Drosselmeyer aren't we.
KatzenBlut chapter 30 . 12/9/2014
Since you told me to review, I'm going to, even though I have only one word to say about this. Adorkabelle. Even though it's not dorky, and adorabel would be a better word, I'm using your claimed word. Anyways, keep writing (Or I will have to take up the flaming katana threat) Good luck, see your later, etc.
kaitouahiru chapter 30 . 3/9/2013
Well, as you can guess by this review, I have finished your story and once again I loved it :) I think the beginning was my favorite, when Haru was running around trying to get to Kinkan Town and when Haru found the book and Naoko found Baron. I thought that was priceless. I especially loved the foreshadowing of the writing through the dreams. I thought it showed how much effort you put into the story.

I love your characterization of Muta, he's always fun to read. I thought that Fakir was a little too formal at time and that Ahiru wasn't as... loud, I guess, as she is in the series. But to be fair, this was a story about Haru and the Baron so they were more in the background than the foreground. And I totally agree with you that it isn't important where Baron and Haru end up but that they're together. I really feel like you caught the Miyazaki lesson of his characters not having a complete ending so we have to wonder where they end up.

Well I'm off to read another one of your fics!
Kaomycs chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
I thought I would never say this in my life but I was scared to death of Baron. Listen, I LOVE the YaningChick of fanfics, all of them are great, but you do not take a step back. I love your fic Haunted, but I'm not in the habit of commenting because I do not speak English, I am Brazilian, so I have to translate everything. Anyway, I just started reading this fanfic and I'm loving not stop writing ok?
Ali3nn3 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Hello :)
First, thank you for writing, and especially writing TCR and Baron/Haru. I did read almost all your stories (only Being Human left) and I believe you are getting better and better. I mean that literally, comparing your oldest (posted, and I supposed also written) story and your newest one, your characters, not only Baron and Haru, but all the bigger ones are getting more and more 3D, are gaining a better balance between realistically human (flawed, that is), likeable, and in character (the only story I wasnt able to read to the end was Spring Rose, and that was because of your Haru there. That you made her beautiful, fine, even if I dont think she was anything special, looks-wise, in the movie, but she was such a typical princess, hopeless, helpless, crying all the time, useless, I really didnt understand how could Baron fall for her, especially when he had Louise around. She started out promising, but after she woke up 100 years later, she just sort of... fizzled out. Even Yuki made more of an impression on me. Sorry.). I think you have something of an opposite to YarningChick going when it comes to inhabitants of your stories. Where she tended (she got better, and so did you) to make them too perfect and all-powerfull, you make them too flawed to the point of being unloveable. That, however wasnt a problem in this story, nor your newer ones, I am happy to say :) As to the plot, I didnt really feel any associations with YCs Of Fur and Feathers, except you two using the same two stories to base your writing on. Basing your writing on something usually means starting with the premises of that something and going from there, in your own direction, sometimes just using characters, objects and logic of that world in your own. You did that beautifully, were not predictable in any way (for a moment there I really did believe Haru was going to die), gave me a happy ending (big personal preference, yay), and inspired me to write you this review (which I am usually too lazy to do) :P So a kiss and a virtual chocolate cake from me, as a thank you, and I hope you will continue to write more, preferably even in this fandom :)
James Birdsong chapter 30 . 1/29/2013
Excellent fanfic
Vorserkeien chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
:-D just a random review just to go YES! Someone else who's seen The Great Mouse Detective! Awesome movie :-D. Oks, back to reading (nice first few ch BTW ;-))
Akabari chapter 21 . 10/15/2012
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Akabari chapter 19 . 10/15/2012
That's.. Sad... Poor Haru. How.. Tragic. Irony. I'm out of words. This chapter made me want to cry..
Akabari chapter 9 . 10/12/2012
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L.M. Dodger chapter 30 . 6/8/2012
I truely don't understand how people would accuse you of copying YarningChick's stories. I mean I love both of you guys stuff but you both have clear difference. You have a dark sort of reality check style while her's always has a happiness in it... If that makes any sense. Anyway I love this story so much, I even think its better than her's at some points, though you both tie for the best crossover story. Keep up the good work.
Elz Durden chapter 21 . 5/1/2012
I loved the art scene. This chapter felt dark. Could be the weather here but it feels overcast, like a storm was slowly being built up through the chapter. (which it was) the art scene was light and gave me a chance to catch my breath while off stage, baron was in dire trouble. It was well balanced. I can only imgaine how angry Haru is and I can't believe Baron thought a simple 'don't be reckless' warning was going to honestly stop her from doing whatever it took to get him back. The way you've written her in this story is extremely strong, though slightly tragic. I'm really enjoying this. I did have to go back a reread a few chapters to find my place - this is the best story to read on a rainy spring day, fits it perfectly. Side note - I can't believe you have already completed this! And months ago! I'm overjoyed I get to devour the whole thing but my goodness, I'll been out of commission lol
myvividreams chapter 30 . 3/10/2012
I loved this story! I can't really find anything to criticize you with, actually. And the plot was awesome! Your writing skills are even more awesome! Did you know? There were times in this story that I wanted to stop reading because I got scared (Yeah, yeah, I'm a scaredy-cat :3) but I bcouldn't/b stop. And now, at the end, I can't stop smiling. And my smile keeps growing, so now my cheeks are hurting and my eyes are starting to water...

Thank you so much for posting this story! I haven't really watched Princess Tutu yet, but I can tell you did awesome! Good Job!
James Birdsong chapter 30 . 2/16/2012
Good ending
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