|Reviews for Listen, But Don't Believe|
| Mitzzi chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I love Dark Lord Lily, especially the way you wrote this. The speech part over the radio was nicely done because you didn't actually write it. Seemed better that way.
| malfoyforever chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I read this a while ago, but I didn't review - this is brilliant! I liked this even better than the Lily one - maybe 'cause it's Scorpius? I like how you brought in Dom - and how you made him listen to all of the stuff Lil was saying on the radio - I have a question, though - is Scorpius's family with her?
| thelilacfield chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Wow, this was incredible and chilling and unbelievable all at once.
The idea was so original! Wow...I'm just speechless.
And thank you so much for the dedication!
| currents chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
DUDE, I LOVE THIS.
I CAN'T EVEN EXPLAIN.
ERIN, I LOVE YOU.
| lowi chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Erin, wow. This was a really good story! It was very wellwritten, I loved the format of it, it was amazing!
And the plot was wonderful! Very very different, but I found it so interesting! Not often you see lily like that, so I think it was a very nice and unique capture of her!
Also Scorpius was captured very good, and Dominique!
Well, it was great! (and sorry for taking this long to review...)
| gooseberrie chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
oh, wow... this looks exciting! lovely use of the prompts, i'm interested to see how the ScorpiusDominique side of things develops, so overall a really fantastic start! there are just a couple of little spelling mistakes ('taked' instead of 'took'), but even the best authors make them, so... a brilliant beginning, i'm looking forward to the rest of this! :)
| chasingafterstarlight chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Whoa. This was haunting, really.
I mean, I've never been a big fan of Lily, but it was scary to think that she could be a new Voldemort. Your ideas were new and original and I actually really liked this piece.
The only thing that could have improved it was if you expanded a bit. I'd actually adore seeing a piece on what went through Lily's head- I might do one at some point, if you wouldn't mind ;) /has too much inspiration.
But anyway, this was just freaking awesome and I loved it :)
| george's firework chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Hauntingly chilling, Erin dear -
/shudders at the thought of Lily being a new Voldemort...
I can't wait to read more, update soon yes?
That was so... attention-catching.