Reviews for Walls Down
madelyn chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
faro is thinking like a human now?
Kat chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
okay, I love Faro and Sapphire together... but there are some things i would change. None of these characters were meant to be that emotional. Sapphire doesn't cry all the time and Faro is stoic. Conor would have protested like crazy to Sapphire leaving. In think you have some really great ideas, but the emotions and dialogue just don't really seem true to the characters.
bring me the pizza chapter 8 . 8/2/2012
Nooooo! This was such a cool story! Oh well, I would say I would continue it but I'm rubbish at writing so yeh... :)
Madin456 chapter 8 . 8/2/2012
You're stopping? D: But it was so good!

Well, it's your decision, so do what you want :D
BlueLeopard chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
oh no you have to finish it! D:
silversnowleopard0110 chapter 7 . 5/22/2012
please write more?
Trapped In Narnia chapter 7 . 4/17/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You have to keep writing! Read the books again, go to the beach, get inspired!
Storm229 chapter 7 . 4/12/2012
Argh! Hate cliffhangers :( Please update soon! :)
Echo1994 chapter 7 . 4/3/2012
Awesome!
What Now chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
Who's close? Who? Ehhhhhhhhhhrrrrggggggg cliffhanger Keep writing! Please! I NEED to know what's happening next D:
whoshallJudgeAngels chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
One thing: Faro could be a little more authentic. Other than that, it's great!
whoshallJudgeAngels chapter 7 . 3/1/2012
Really good story! You must [must] update!
Sanity's Darkest Dream chapter 7 . 1/27/2012
Like your story. few spelling mistakes though. keep writing. CLIFFHANGER! needs more chapters...
ReadingWriting1342 chapter 7 . 1/2/2012
This is really good! Please update soon!
Random asian guy chapter 7 . 11/5/2011
Luv ur story! And i luv how its all mesterious and how they're POV's are rly detailed

Update soon! :)
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