Reviews for The Portrait |
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![]() ![]() How sweet, i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember this story from 5 years ago in 2008 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...nice ending, but i think it was a bit TOO sudden...nice job,and fluff galore! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() . How sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story a lot though it seemed a little rushed. It might have been better if you expanded on Kaoru and Kenshin's relationship and wrote how each character reacted to Kenshin's retirement. I'm sure that Hiko wasn't thrilled about the aspect nor Megumi. It might have also been interesting to see how Megumi reacted to Kenshin and Kaoru being together. She might like Sano, but a woman can be jealous! tehehe Like I said before, I liked the story. Cute idea! You must have a thing for Kenshin and cameras. ;) Ja ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute i love this story it is so cute again lol keep up the good work antica _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That first date, the "cute sales clerk" sounds like Sanosuke, the mooching, the comment about the small knockers. That was Sano, wasn't it? _x |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO...ive read this the first time on ur site...but the second time?AH! SO FUNNYY!...the "I'm Too sexy thing" was funny!..GREAT JOB..u have such a great way of writing! |
![]() ![]() Please excuse me. *walks out of room, soon hysterical laughter can be heard in the backround. Comes back in* Sorry 'bout that, the "I'm too sexy" thing was HILAROUS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you've done it again! writting another spectacular kenshin&kaoru fic! this one gave me the same bubbly feeling i got when i read It Happened in Time Square and Kiss Me Again. i love kenshin&kaoru fics! do you ever cease to amaze me? well gotta go! oh yeah! kenshin as a model? now that's hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() imao! this was too funny! kaoru getting her toe stuck... stealing saitou's cigs... i'm soo happy that i found this! it was wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story :) |
![]() ![]() Sorry I Thought It's not yet Finish. Gomen... My Bad...I'm embarass... |
![]() ![]() Hi nice ficcie I like it. I wish you could update more THIS 2004 man Its been maybe 2 years now WOHO!. PLEASE UPDATE GIRL! ONEGAI! Have*a*nice*day ! ~*~RuRoKeNfAn~*~ |
![]() ![]() [sigh] i love all your stories...always filled with that yummy waffiness |