|Reviews for The Adventure of the Cardboard Box|
| Stevi Re chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
| Pergjithshme chapter 3 . 9/15/2012
I'm so happy for John. :)
| Doni chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
John was down right adorable in this one, as was Sherlock's fondness. I also appreciate an interesting case worked into the cuteness. ;)
| Spinner12 chapter 3 . 3/2/2012
Oooh! A boy! I guess you couldn't call him Scarlet this time. Good job.
| Spinner12 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Oh, this is a good start. By the way, what's a "duck face?"
| FearandLoathingXIX chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
I looooooooooved it. Although the series shipteases John and Sherlock too much for me not to secretly in some part want them to be in love and together forever in their weird sort-of-but-not relationship kind of way, your version of them here with Mary (who I love) and the balance of John/Mary and Sherlock still being around *all* the time is fantastic. It's absolutely spot on, they're still best friends, Mary shoving him off to go and play with Sherlock when he's a pain is so perfect and realistic, and basically I can read these stories as a replacement for new episodes almost.
My inner-fangirl is very confused about John and Sherlock and the series does not help it by dropping weird hints all over the place, but I honestly adore your John/Sherlock/Mary/Lestrade in this series of stories and I would looooove any more attempts of modernisations baby Watson. (Sherlock definitely needs to be wearing a baby-pouch at a crime scene at some point, complete with baby). That might just be me being weird though.
Anyway, loved the story, just the fix to get me between the new episodes of series 2 waaaaaah. Thanks, Fear.
| LinZE chapter 3 . 11/20/2011
I love this series of fics - your portrayal of Sherlock and John's relationship is briliant.
Thank you so much for sharing and I hope that you get a chance to write more in this arc.
Thanks again for sharing
| chironsgirl chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Only twelve pictures? He wasn't even trying! Yes, I would like to see more of this. Sherlock getting to know "Unexpectedly Male" Watson has great potential!
| YoNoSoy chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
skdfjkdswklo excited John is adorable! A boy! Well, that was a surprise. Aw, he should call the baby Mycroft just to annoy Sherlock, LOL. This is just too cute for words! *_* I actually like the name Jack a lot, and James. But well, they can't call him James, can they? xD Er, why am I discussing baby names? I'm so random. Sorry. xD Awesome fic. :3
| Bug-eyed Monster chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
Loved how John was acting in anticipating the baby. No wonder he was getting on Mary's nerves.
And I'm not surprised that Sherlock doesn't care about the case at all, what with his new god-less son to watch over. Hee!
| FoxSparrow33 chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
"He nodded, satisfied that John had clearly got the best one."
Fabulous. This was delightful, and I thoroughly enjoyed the instant gratification, all three chapters in one go! Another brilliant entry in the series. Great job!
| MaybeAmanda chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
A boy! You sneak! That baby's been Scarlet in my head so long I just assumed! You are so clever!
"I was at school with a boy called Cuthbert St John Sebastian Pridd. I strongly recommend you don't use any of those names."
And as for what's coming next, I'm sure you'll think of something!
Thanks for the great read, Pip!
| Pilikia18 chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
Oh, wow! Another splendid story! Pip, you're awesome!
I loved everything but especially the "godless-father" bit. :-) I could picture the boys as if I saw a movie. Very believable. I also loved Sherlock's and John's "dual topic" conversation. The language was very convincing. The adaptation of the original ACD story was brilliantly executed! I could go on and on... Thank you! It's a treasure!
| MaybeAmanda chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
"Good. Do you have any food? I'm starving." He opened her biscuit tin and was pleased that it was well stocked. She had been known to empty it and leave a note reading 'buy your own!', but not usually if he was working or upset about something.
I love Mrs. Hudson!
| MaybeAmanda chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Good beginning. Going to go read the rest of it right now ;)