Reviews for Pity the Living
Spellweaver10 chapter 1 . 2/9
This is a great one shot. Well writen and with a strong message. I can see this happens to a young Vegeta.
Reader chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
This was a little on the boring side... Nothing happened and it feels anticlimactic. I feel gipped.
DBZLover4Ever chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Me gusta! Really good, original and inventive. Made me think of Harry Potter but this was completely separate too!
jessi chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
LadyLaide chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I quite like this, although I have seen another fic which starts out like yours about the whole killing, pity, you're just like Frieza type scenario.

Was grammatically sound anyhow.

Wonder where you'll take this next.
WildVegeta chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Amazing story. Great work
abbbandonedaccount chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I love this. This has to be one of the BEST one shots I've ever read. Your insight was realistic and your style is witty. Amazing. Keep up the good work.
cara9001 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
very nice story ) and i love the image of nappa with the flowers lol
Greendragonsheart chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Nice job. Interesting viewpoint from the victim in the fic. Obviously Vegeta's unrest is due to realizing but NOT admitting that HE is the true victim. Being a slave to Frieza's will not his own. And while he mocks Nappa, the older Saiyan knows what it was like to be nice work!