|Reviews for Pity the Living|
| Spellweaver10 chapter 1 . 2/9
This is a great one shot. Well writen and with a strong message. I can see this happens to a young Vegeta.
| Reader chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
This was a little on the boring side... Nothing happened and it feels anticlimactic. I feel gipped.
| DBZLover4Ever chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Me gusta! Really good, original and inventive. Made me think of Harry Potter but this was completely separate too!
| jessi chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
| LadyLaide chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I quite like this, although I have seen another fic which starts out like yours about the whole killing, pity, you're just like Frieza type scenario.
Was grammatically sound anyhow.
Wonder where you'll take this next.
| WildVegeta chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Amazing story. Great work
| abbbandonedaccount chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I love this. This has to be one of the BEST one shots I've ever read. Your insight was realistic and your style is witty. Amazing. Keep up the good work.
| cara9001 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
very nice story ) and i love the image of nappa with the flowers lol
| Greendragonsheart chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Nice job. Interesting viewpoint from the victim in the fic. Obviously Vegeta's unrest is due to realizing but NOT admitting that HE is the true victim. Being a slave to Frieza's will not his own. And while he mocks Nappa, the older Saiyan knows what it was like to be nice work!