|Reviews for Coming Home|
| Zute chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Hot, hot, hot! Have I reviewed this before? Two of my favorite DAO men. Le sigh!
| Suilven chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
"Can you try talking Sebastian out of wearing that face on his crotch? It's incredibly distracting." LOL
That Antivan brandy sure seems to get around, doesn't it? I love the fact that Zevran basically invited himself in. Too funny.
| naomis8329 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Definitely NSFW but ooh what fun. Now I wonder how she'll handle this in Act 3 when she's asked to go and get him for the Crows lol. Maybe a follow up is needed here. I can just imagine the look on her face when she realises who it is she's been sent to apprehend. And what will Zev say to her? Think about it at least lol.
Another wonderful short, a lot of fun.
Thanks for sharing hun
| Morwen33 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Hahahaha. . .Antivan brandy in your one-shots is like that damn gong on the mountaintop: As soon as you see it, you know trouble is coming. DON'T DRINK THE BRANDY! DON'T DRINK THE- Aw, you drank it. . .
Good fun. :)
| Enaid Aderyn chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Okay, first of all this: "Can you try talking Sebastian out of wearing that face on his crotch? It's incredibly distracting." is made of win on its own.. Distracting. Yes. Not to mention creepy and ridiculous. :D
The family visit was the ideal way to get them all together, and I just love that Zevran simply trailed along and invited himself in. Somehow it just Felt Right. :D And possessive Loghain is rawr.
This: "Maker's red ass, it was my vacation, after all." WIN! ;DD Great job!
| Dante Alighieri1308 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Ah Zevren... Able to woo anybody!
| Kendoka Girl chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
"Can you try talking Sebastian out of wearing that face on his crotch? It's incredibly distracting."
OMG, I about spit water laughing when I read this! :D
Wonderful mixing of the two DA worlds and a steamy triangle - meow
| Arsinoe de Blassenville chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Bad girl! Naughty! (Smiles, like everyone else in the story)
| pulchritudo in omnia chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
I think I will need to fan myself now. Who would have thought Loghain would submit himself to sharing a woman with an elf. xD I always pictured him as a man who only believed in the typical one woman and one man relationship. Sexual here, obviously. I also always thought he'd be the kind of guy to only take someone on a bed, which you've written in here. But that's besides the point. Even in these works where they're basically three parts smut and one part everything else, you can definitely tell you have a really awesome writing style. I've been reading Lhi's story because I've been reading your challenges and became interested in them because of your style. I'm happy I did. :)
But these hot little one-shots are welcomed on the side. Yup. ;)
| Tyanilth chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Wonderfully done, and oh no, Antivan Brandy again? When will they all learn? :) No, scratch that, they know already...
Challenge valiantly achieved. Oh, someone was asking for me? No, no Tyanilth to be seen here...:)
| Shakespira chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
As soon as I saw the brandy I shuddered. When will Loghain learn?
A great answer to the challenge, brandy notwithstanding! ;)
The meeting between Loghain and Korrine was hot and full of innuendo and it seemed as if they were going to combust right there on the docks.
Very hot between the three of them and I loved the line "Why not? I'm on vacation." Indeed.
Hot and awesome answer to the challenge.
| cloud1004 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Ha, Zevran and Antivan brandy? There's only one possible outcome! I think after this our taciturn Warden will be looking for you with a whip in his hand, Josie!