|Reviews for Oddly Synful|
| duneline chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
J'ai adore. Une suite?
| lil joker 1989 chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
This was a really great two chapters :)
| Casey 'Flame' Wolfe chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
Love it! Ever consider continuing?
| Casey 'Flame' Wolfe chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Rofl! OMG, that was so great. I swear I laughed for a whole minute- loudly- at the "Babe, I don't know what you are saying… but god do you sound sexy" part. My husband was staring at me like I'd grown another head.
| KittyWillCutYou chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
"Babe, I don't know what you are saying… but god do you sound sexy."
*nods* Yeah, it be like day sometimes. :3
| The Patchwork Cat chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
Have you thought about doing a companion fic to this where you explore a kink Vaako has? You've certainly captured Riddicks (I can totally imagine him with a language kink) but I'm curious as to what Vaako's might be...
| sub0chick chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
very nice, and you did good with the plot that snuck in lol love how complicated and easy their relationship is and i'd love to see more of this
| Angelzodica013 chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
I cannot believe it! You guys wrote the second chapter! XD And my stupid e-mail didn't notified me D:
Anywho I love the chapter! And its the first story with mulit-chaps too! Vaako was just so damn hot in here. Ugh I don't even know where to start. Lets just say that the whole thing was blazing! /
Oh and the Alpha! XD I swear, I love those dogs! I want one of my own. It had me laughing when I read wat happen to the metal. Priceless. I believe the blame could be put on Riddick for not taking them off his lover XD
And the whole leaving a mark. So deep. I felt bad for Vaako because of that. The whole time I was thinking "It's okay cuz you have Riddick now and not that women." TT
Again, AWESOME! lol
| Doni chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
Very nicely done.
| Lady Talla-doe chapter 2 . 8/1/2011
THAT was fabulous. I like how you cycled through Vaako's emotions, and make the sex a secondary focus, rather then the first.
I /wish/ I'd been able to read this when I first got the notification, but I had to get up, and run around for fourteen hours, so Instead of reading it, I pined about it for the rest of the day. But it was worth the wait! I adore your writing. You do it so well
| 7thcircleofhell chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
Yep I love it! Perfect smut/tease/violence ratio yet again! And i do love the bit with the hellhound melting his arm piece and jumping him! ;)
| Angelzodica013 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
YES! Another Ridko story!
I love the idea. Thank you David and your beautiful mind! I wonder if Riddick ever heard another lanuage before... I can totally understand how he feels XD And Vaako! Holy shit!
In your other story you made him all angsty because it was a onesided thing. But here! He has life! He fights and he acts and their hated moments...*blushes* I could totally see everything you were writting.
So the reason as to why Vaako was sort of ignoring Riddick was cuz he was learning a new lanuage and of course, time makes the heart fonder. XD Just wanted to make sure. Again, I LOVE IT!
| Zuvios Gemini chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Language kinks are always great to read. X3
| LordxXxofxXxDorkness chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
XD Dedication, Vaako. That be what the man is made of. Pure awesome dedication.
| 7thcircleofhell chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I fucking loved it! Actually believable relationship between the two. Good job ;)