Reviews for Self Inflicted Wounds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter also flowed very well. I loved how Elena stormed in and poked him in the chest, and Damon's reaction was all true to character. Caroline too, she cracks me up. I honestly got goosebumps when Stefan..well, you know, snapped the girl's neck. Eek. The blatant disregard for these girls, and the overall calmness about it is very creepy to me. A psycho killer that shreds one to pieces is one thing...but an intelligent, intrigued killer is something else entirely. I love the level of creepiness you have given Klaus and Stefan so far - and its only Chapter 3. Tweeting this again. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job. plzz update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fact that the phantom sensation of Damon's lips against hers still made Elena's breath catch and her stomach flip had absolutely nothing to do with it. this is awesome. also, once again caroline is a badass. and i simply cannot wait for damon and elena's confrontation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this so far. Please update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo! Damon's gonna be in big trouble! I'm very much looking forward to the confrontation. Their chemistry always comes out when they're fighting, don't you think? Again, very well-written and realistic. Well, realistic in terms of the show ;) And excellent character consistency, too. I'm having a really good time reading this. Hope you keep it up and update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, I read TVD fanfiction religiously. Some stories are okay, and few are truly amazing. Stories that make you cry, get you excited or, well, make you angry. This story, already in Chapter 2 has those qualities of an amazing fanfiction. You write very, very, well. I hope that you continue with this story. I will tweet it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good and realistic! This deserves so many more reviews, can't wait for the next chapter! :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() please tell me you're continuing! the characters are brilliantly rendered, really. and this: When he was upset, he forgot to control it and if she slipped and fell in they couldn't keep avoiding each other. WOW. so perfect. seriously can't wait for more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Very well-written, and excellent job getting in Stefan's head. I feel like that's a big challenge, and you did it very believably. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good! I liked how you made Elena so believable with her grief, and how you managed to show Damon's guilt so well! And the Jeremy/Bonnie part was good (except everyone knows that Jeremy uses bing! :D haha, just kidding!). Stefan's part was good and I liked how you showed him cutting off his emotions. Please update soon! :) |