Reviews for Origami Lesson
AliceRosalie chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
This was very cute, but I recommend expanding on your ideas. It helps to make a longer, more story-like, fic. Your writing style is very enjoyable to read. I loved the "dying bird squawks." :)
kenpodoll chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Aww thank you. I love the favorites and the reviews. So inspiring. Let me know what you like and don't like! Thanks!
elizainlove chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
nawwww thats so cute :D xx
notinthislifetime chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Awwwww! :) i can so picture this happening...