What the fuck this is so dumb kys

I wouldn't think the staff would get suspicious, not really. Hotels... you just say stuff about what type of room you want, you don't have to say 'i want a room for me and a kid with one bed'

I have the strangest feeling that Goku and Vege are doing the dirty... and that Goku knows about Gohan but doesn't exactly 'understand' or he actually doesn't care, and that Vegeta is too caught up on Goku to figure it out for himself...

I may be wayyyy off base here, but these are my thoughts o_o

A lot of times when writers do something like this, it inspires much controversy simply because of the subject being 'immoral' and it IS and WOULD BE if these were real people. Personally I am a fujoshi of the highest caliber, and rarely can comprehend the idea of pedophilia irl, but written like this for fictional characters gives it a certain distance and... well, I just mean to say it's good.

Odd, but then again what 'normal' story is all that great anyway?

o.o O.O o.O O.o . . . What in the heck did I just read?

Da fuq is this?! Da fuq is that?! Da fuq are those?!

Da fuq am I reading?

YAY WARMTH AND SAPPINESS! Seriously though...at first i was so damn put off by that "8 year old adult" thing...kinda cringed a few times, not gonna lie. But it was nicely written 3

Wow. Just wow. And not in a bad way either! Although the pairing (Esp with age) can acrew a LOT of criticism , this was by far one of the most BEAUTIFUL, FUNNY, SENSUAL, DRAMATIC AND DETAILED STORY I HAVE EVER READ! I love how you kept the characters in character via Canon, with Goku being the bubbly loving father with the aggressive edge when it comes to family, Vegeta bearing his patriotism towards the Saiyan race and extinct class , and Of course Gohan being the ever so studious young adult and Trunks being the clever, witty , kid. It's such an amazing story, and the little foreshadows from Vegeta and Goku were clever! Impressive! The yaoi and slash of course, EXCELLENT DETAILS! I am so in love with this story and hope you continue making more complex , romantic suspense stories . Gohan x Trunks (not Mirai ) WONDERFUL PAIRING! Btw, where's piccolo ?! JKAYYYY! Loved it! queenmexipina

That was... so moving I... that has to be one of the best love story's I have ever read.
You are a true genius. Words can not describe... You need to be righting books. The way I feel after reading that i have not felt that way in years. Thank you soo much.

O_O

4.5/5

You got me curious on what vegeta said. But any way, this was awesome.

Gohan is fucked.

Damn man! Can u write lemon or what? U are oh so talented arent u? Why arent u god of yaoi? U are arent u? If u arent, i am electing u as one.

Your doing amazing for your first review. I can autually see them right in front of me.