|Reviews for Naruto: The New Story|
| Amaterasu1991 chapter 2 . 10/9/2013
| killer4853 chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
| Angel wolf11021 chapter 7 . 2/12/2013
write more soon this is a really good story.
| Shisarakage chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
Aside from the awesomeness that is the comedic side to this story (which I find VERY entertaining), I recognize all three S-Rank jutsu listed here.
First, the 'Slicing Dragon Twister'. That just screams 'Inuyasha influence' to me, as the name of the attack used by Inuyasha in "Swords of an Honorable Ruler" was 'Dragon Twister', if memory serves, and was unleashed thanks to Soun'ga (the third sword, brother to Tessaiga and Tenseiga).
Then there's 'Explosive Bite of the Water Dragon' and 'Twin Lightning Shiver', both of which I recognize instantly from "Naruto Shippuden - Ultimate Ninja Storm Generations". However, I'd like to point out that (thanks to my own love of the technique and the fact I play with the Japanese audio more often than not) the Japanese name for the 'Twin Lightning Shiver' is "Raiton - Souraishin". I know that one by heart because I spammed it until I'd memorized the damn thing.
Unfortunately, my mind isn't picking up the Japanese name for the 'Explosive Bite of the Water Dragon' as easily.
Anyways, I like the idea of an Aburame bug-zapper, and Kakashi's gonna be beyond jealous if he ever witnesses Shino-San using the 'Souraishin'.
That said, keep up the great work.
| dragon master chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
his name is kakashi not kasha
| tennyo godde chapter 7 . 11/28/2012
Im so hooked on this story when is the next chapter coming out please let it be soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Well this is a special pile of steaming shit
| Naruto Fan chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
Your story concept is intriguing but your way of writing and remembrance of past actions is confusing to say the least. It's hard to follow on the Kakashi plot,Sasuke plot basically the whole story plot as there are plenty of contradictions. Case in point in one of the early chapters you apparently punish Kakashi buy demoting him but later on he is the same rank before the demotion with no explanation. You really need to recheck your story from start to recent as it seems to be getting worse actually rather then better.
| KingLoitl chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Mei Terumi is her name
| puma1sunfire chapter 6 . 3/4/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story! I look forward to its continuation.
| WrathOfSoul chapter 6 . 2/3/2012
Uh...I get confused about the flow of this story...can you please clean it up? I'm not flaming you but you will need a beta reader...especially the way this story just... instantaneously jump to one part then jump back...I hope to read a better, cleaned story after this. Thank you.
| rescue 007 chapter 6 . 2/3/2012
this chapter was so incredbily stupid that im going to stop reading.
| Deathwatch Razgriz chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
This sounded so promising until you paired him with Hinata. Good bye, I hope that you will never darken my door with another NaruxHina(Spineless Whore)!
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 6 . 2/1/2012
I like it! **
| I Read For the Content chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
If you have 72,933,41,392 apples and you took half of it away how many do you have left?
Well...whatever it is, it's improperly comma'ed...
Hinata and Naruto insta-together, insta-OP, insta-loss of instarest