|Reviews for Naruto: The New Story|
| Monster King chapter 7 . 9/21
OK story but are you going to finish it?
| Natsubi chapter 7 . 12/6/2015
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINNISH THIS BOOK
| rexus chapter 7 . 10/9/2015
Juuinjutsu : cursed sealing
Jikukan ninjutsu : space time jutsu
| Korog the Oversoul chapter 3 . 9/15/2015
You F-ing tease! Not cool on the Mei and Yugito thing being a dream. Also why didn't Naruto use Senbonzakura more?
| Korog the Oversoul chapter 2 . 9/15/2015
Mei Terumi. And Naruto got CRAed anyway, love it add Anko, Tayuya, and Temari and I would love to be him. But Kasha was pretty weird about Kurenai and Ino.
| narmulti chapter 7 . 5/26/2015
Good story keep it up and UPDATE SOON
| Amaterasu1991 chapter 2 . 10/9/2013
| killer4853 chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
| Angel wolf11021 chapter 7 . 2/12/2013
write more soon this is a really good story.
| Shisarakage chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
Aside from the awesomeness that is the comedic side to this story (which I find VERY entertaining), I recognize all three S-Rank jutsu listed here.
First, the 'Slicing Dragon Twister'. That just screams 'Inuyasha influence' to me, as the name of the attack used by Inuyasha in "Swords of an Honorable Ruler" was 'Dragon Twister', if memory serves, and was unleashed thanks to Soun'ga (the third sword, brother to Tessaiga and Tenseiga).
Then there's 'Explosive Bite of the Water Dragon' and 'Twin Lightning Shiver', both of which I recognize instantly from "Naruto Shippuden - Ultimate Ninja Storm Generations". However, I'd like to point out that (thanks to my own love of the technique and the fact I play with the Japanese audio more often than not) the Japanese name for the 'Twin Lightning Shiver' is "Raiton - Souraishin". I know that one by heart because I spammed it until I'd memorized the damn thing.
Unfortunately, my mind isn't picking up the Japanese name for the 'Explosive Bite of the Water Dragon' as easily.
Anyways, I like the idea of an Aburame bug-zapper, and Kakashi's gonna be beyond jealous if he ever witnesses Shino-San using the 'Souraishin'.
That said, keep up the great work.
| dragon master chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
his name is kakashi not kasha
| tennyo godde chapter 7 . 11/28/2012
Im so hooked on this story when is the next chapter coming out please let it be soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Well this is a special pile of steaming shit
| Naruto Fan chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
Your story concept is intriguing but your way of writing and remembrance of past actions is confusing to say the least. It's hard to follow on the Kakashi plot,Sasuke plot basically the whole story plot as there are plenty of contradictions. Case in point in one of the early chapters you apparently punish Kakashi buy demoting him but later on he is the same rank before the demotion with no explanation. You really need to recheck your story from start to recent as it seems to be getting worse actually rather then better.
| KingLoitl chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Mei Terumi is her name