Reviews for iWant It, You Want It
TechTrooper64 chapter 2 . 7/16
I like it, its steamy, sexy and downright satisfying very close to character for both of them i like it alot
Puppy64 chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
It was a very hot story I loved it :)
LoveMeBerlin chapter 2 . 1/31/2014
Oh my god !
It was sooooooooooo
oooooooooo gooooo
oooooooood !
I loooooved it :D
You have a hell of a talent to write,
it got me all heated up...
I loved the last sentence :P
good work !
stxrdusty chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
I really like this story, so sweet!
DorkyBlonde chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
it was really sweet! i loved how you kept everything in character and i can honestly picture the emotions you portrayed! it was fluffy good old seddie that i love
beautifulmystery93 chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
You included everything wow!. My favorite thing about this is how you wrote you write her perfectly, and lol. Hot sexy everything you could ask for in a freaking bag!. :D yo you good. Lol
beautifulmystery93 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Lol I freaking love this!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
I think you accomplished everything and more. Great story :)
miscellaneousmystery chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I like how you kept Sam and Freddie in character even in a very serious moment between them... I also like how you when into detail of how much it means means to her, the feelings she felt and stuff. lol, yep! :D

oh, and they ending was funny, woot woot! (:
inctiveaccount999 chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
I loved how in-character you kept them them .
Julziexx3 chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
I loved this! Just the right amount of smut and unlike most seddie smut fics, it was completely in character! Seriously great, I really enjoyed reading it :).
SayWhut209 chapter 2 . 1/30/2012
i absolutely loved it~~! pretty hot;"}}}}
foodluver chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
I thought it was really well written, and cute!
Jeanette2150 chapter 2 . 10/14/2011
I thought it was good story. I liked that Sam and Freddie weren't out of character and i thought the ending was sweet and funny at the same time.
joeygracie chapter 2 . 10/11/2011
I thought you did a good job of keeping them both in character, especially since it is hard to do. I have problems with that when i write my own stories. I have often read fan fictions that are future of Sam and Freddy (and many other fandoms and stories) that never thought to actually...i don't know...think about how they'd really be like at that point. I could easily imagine Sam and Freddy like this at that age. Most of the time i'm very leery about going in an reading fan fictions written in first person also. I find that a lot of times they lack a certain depth and...perhaps they seem a bit to...crude? Especially when it comes to scenes of the intimate nature. I thought Sam's line of thought about the entire thing was entertaining, a mix of funny and serious at times. there were some parts, mostly around the actual sex, that i stopped and had to imagine one of them saying it. I will say, that i applaud you for not swearing every five minutes. I have found way too many of them where it seems so out of character for someone to be throwing out fuck every two words. I think you made a good balance of giving readers enough detail with what was going on physically as well as mentally. Overall i thought it was good and with the exceptions of the few moments of having to think on how one of them would say something there aren't many faults i can find with it as far as smutty fan fiction goes.

I didn't see any grammatical errors (though i was reading it at like...three in the morning so i may have just ignored them) and i thought it flowed well. It's definitely one of the fan fictions i'd read again, for these reasons.
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