Reviews for Rise of the Forgotten Book One: The Lost Child
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 9/2/2016
its a shame this wasnt continued, its really quite well done
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 9/2/2016
so now herwald has rho aias to use in a pinch, thats certainly going to come in handy
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 9/2/2016
hopefully this will cause dumbles to take the stones protection more seriously, and that theres a fair amount of damage underneath herwalds amicable shell
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 9/2/2016
a more sensible draco should be interesting, i wonder which way that particular coin will fall?
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 9/2/2016
its good that the brothers potter are getting along, they make pretty good foils for each other
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 9/2/2016
nice use of that chekov's gun, i suspect that mcgonnagals dislike is due to someone she lost during the war
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 9/2/2016
nice job on the character interaction, and on making herwald rational and inteligent without being OP
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 9/2/2016
its interesting to see dumbledors pov, i wonder how the brothers will react to each other
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 9/2/2016
nice bit of dialouge with the sorting hat, though the time you spend restating cannon (like its song) is rather superfluous
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 9/2/2016
harry's certainly got guts, it should be cool to see where that raw ambition takes him
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 9/2/2016
props to aloysius for having at least some level of human kindness, and to bertram for offering harry a path out of the streets
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 9/2/2016
its good that scar took out the worst of his abusers, though hopefully he wont react that way without good reason
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 9/2/2016
scars growing up in one heck of a crucible, but where the dursleys left cannon harry naive and gullible scar seems to be growing stronger despite his pain. nice take on the trolls btw!
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 9/2/2016
it should be cool to see how the prodigal son reacts upon his return
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 9/2/2016
its always cool to see a voldemort thats more pragmatic, interesting setup all round!
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