Reviews for Chowilawu
rrochelle465 chapter 9 . 12/6/2015
Awww Seth is very sweet... And bella us more determined than ever to make this married work... Hmmm how is the pups mother? So many questions...this was a great story I can't wait to read more...good job
rrochelle465 chapter 8 . 12/5/2015
Yay go Charlie your the man...
rrochelle465 chapter 7 . 12/5/2015
O boy Jake is not a happy camper right now...
rrochelle465 chapter 6 . 12/5/2015
Aww they are starting to get along ...
rrochelle465 chapter 5 . 12/5/2015
Aww. It's going well so far...
rrochelle465 chapter 4 . 12/5/2015
Awww poor Alice I hope she get better soon...poor Renee she will have to deal with the fact that her child is married and the daddy knows best...
rrochelle465 chapter 3 . 12/5/2015
Yay the are married...now it's time to party...,
rrochelle465 chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
Awww u hope things are better by tomorrow...
rrochelle465 chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Poor Jake he is isn't to happy right now but he will do what he have to for his people...
Lovergirl367 chapter 9 . 9/1/2014
What kind of torture is this that happens next what happens next please please please update I will love you so much if you would please updated
pece87 chapter 9 . 12/20/2013
Ah. I did notice about Seth's mom. Now I get it.
Alice acknowledged his words! Its something :)
Bella must be Jake's imprint since she is so comfortable around him. Look how easily they made up.
How cute that the pup recognized Embry as a wolf lol
A wolf puppy! How adorable.

Oh my gosh! Please ladies, come back and continue to write chapters for this wonderful time period story!
pece87 chapter 8 . 12/19/2013
Both conversations with billy and charlie were enlightening. Billy because he seemed to want to pick Bella's brain on how she feels for Jacob. And maybe provoke her a little and see what she said. As for Charlie, because I did not think he would defend his reasoning for the marriage to be at all for love for his daughter. He seemed genuine, in wanting Jake and thinking Jake was a better choice for Bella then Edward. I still think it was part for land and such but still lol.
Whose whimpering in the woods? I was kind of hoping Jake may have lost his temper after Bella left and phased and it was him in the woods. But its probably Embry. Trouble?
pece87 chapter 7 . 12/19/2013
All points considered I hope Jake did imprint. That would be amazing if he was the first alpha to imprint and on a pale face none the less.
This is what the second time he has snapped at Bella, I think his temper is arising lol.
pece87 chapter 6 . 12/19/2013
That mother of hers is a horrible wench! What will she do? :(
Bella taking the initiative. Nice.
Jakes hands all over... intoxicating!
pece87 chapter 5 . 12/19/2013
*Snickers* You tell the girls Leah! ;) Will she tell tribal members that Bella and Jake have not sealed the deal. :/
Yay! Bella is showing interest in the tribe customs! I hope she also makes an effort to learn their native tongue.
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