|Reviews for A Touch of Destiny|
| nobodez chapter 6 . 4/17/2014
Found this recently. Hope you write more.
| nineteennintytwo chapter 6 . 8/11/2012
This is a really good story and I would love it if it was continued :D You're doing a good job!
| Tenages chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
Your story isn't bad. But on the other hand it bears no real relation to your summary.
The summary implies that it's the logical extrapolation of how the OT would have played out if Luke and Leia switched places. But it just isn't. You make changes that have no basis in anything except for the fact that you think they're cool plot ideas. They don't make sense and they certainly aren't based in any sort of reality of accurate characterization.
For instance why in the hell would Owen let Leia live on her own the city. Not only was he charged to watch her and protect, she's an attractive young women living on a planet populated and run by Hutts and slavers. She's in more danger that Luke ever was. It's freaking ludicrous to have her living in the city on her own. The only reason you did is to make your story "different" and because you think it's cool.
Similary, Luke's behavior on the Tantive 4. His innermost, intrinsic nature is more risktaking and fly by his pants then Leia. But having been raised in the exact same way that she was in the real OT, he somehow comes to the course of action that prevents any bloodshed and defuses Vader's anger? Really? Get real.
I'm not even going to comment on Luke unconsciously using Force lightning. That was just stupid.
| Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 chapter 6 . 10/19/2011
Great story so far.
| shieldmaiden19 chapter 6 . 10/3/2011
This chapter, actually this whole story, is very interesting and quite well-written. I look forward to hearing more from you :)
| Rylee87 chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
Wow, that's interesting. I wonder how things are going to turn out now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Enigmaticity chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
plese keep on writing this is really good
| Well chapter 4 . 7/31/2011
Interesting that Vader offered Luke that opportunity first thing. Is Leia going to try to save Luke now? It will be interesting to see if Luke tries to convert Vader[back?]. Good stuff!
| rosesforever294 chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
soooo good! update ASAP!
| Rylee87 chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
This sounds interesting so far. I have always wondered what it would be like if Luke and Leia switched places. Can't wait to read the next chapter _
| rosesforever294 chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
i like it!
| imperativa chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
Very interesting! Can't wait to see more :)