Reviews for Short Stories Full of Costumes, Magic and Stuff
Sandra1105 chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
Peer pressure, I HATE IT! This is a pretty cool story. It's really relateable too. Nancy really doesn't know who to be...its actually kinda sad. I like this chapter though.
Vanessa Osbourne chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
Wow, that must've been one artistic-looking bus interior! Go Fanboy for making the bus look nicer! XD

Cute stories! I like Rima's caring and kind personality. I hope to see more soon!
Vanessa Osbourne chapter 3 . 7/23/2011
How dare Duke be a jerk! It's JUST a game man!

Lovely. Kyle's such a great boyfriend. :D Oh, and by the way:

"My mother chose those glittered demonds."

I think you mean "diamonds." Or did you mean "demons?"

Anyway, this was a really cool story! I hope to see more soon! :D
Vanessa Osbourne chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
...Wow, Yo wasn't very nice. WHY DIDN'T SHE INVITE CHUGGY? DX WHY?

Oookay, I got a little out of hand there. Anyway, nice job! That was so sweet of Rima to invite the other rejected teens over to play. :)
Vanessa Osbourne chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Aw! Poor, innocent little Chum Chum. When will he learn...:P Oh well, at least he's still got his youth...I do NOT know why I just said that. Anyway, cute idea to do short stories of Rima's teenage years. XD

I hope to see more of this and your other short stories! XD
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