Reviews for Monster Deep Inside
Soundwave's Sparkmate chapter 1 . 4/28
ver good
alyuchiha913 chapter 1 . 1/11
This was definitely not what I had in mind when I read your summary, but daamnnnn, it was brilliant.

I love this dark side to Soundwave, as morbid as it may seem to an extent. You know that saying "It's the quiet ones you have to watch" - your description of Soundwave in this piece totally fits that quote. It's like he's a nano-second away from pure insanity, and Megatron is the only one who can keep him in check...and in such a deliciously primal way. I love it!

I also really like the dynamic you have going between the three commanding officers. It suits their character well. Great work!

Peace Out! _
russianwinter013 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
I've said it before; I'll say it again: you are amazing! You use such voice and description...
ADAl44T-KB-O chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
This was an excellent one-shot.
It brought a much darker side to TFP Soundwave than I have ever read before and that is great.
You writing is impeccable and the imagery so very stunning.
The dynamic you have set up between the three heads is intriguing and I would love to see a continuation of this fic.
The sticky was great and I loved how you actually made it support the story more than writing some story to justify the sex. That is something I find done quite often and it is annoying.
You are an excellent writer.
Evangeline101 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Alright. First things first.

I absolutely love tfp Soundwave and you have done an excellent job with him. The characterization and the way you describe his thoughts: perfection in its essence. I loved it.

Second of all.
You are an amazing writer and your writing style is absolutely beautiful. A bunch of times I stopped and just bathed in the fact that someone on this website proof reads and edits their fics before posting them. You should be knighted for this deed.

Lastly:
Awesome story, enjoyed the steamy,sticky scene. Was very descriptive, which is way better than reading "they had robo jiggy jiggy. Its nice." As I have previously experienced. Its one of those pick-up-your-laptop-and-drop-it-off-the-highest-bu ilding-in-my-city moments.

Your fic was an absolute pleasure to read. It is a definite follow from me. I hope you continue to write as you are extremely talented.
Stay awesome.

Love and Rockets
Evangeline101
xxx
strawberrieNinja chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
This is so gorgeous, ahhhhh, I love your vocabulary. You write such delicious robot-anatomy analogies. I love how you portrayed Soundwave's relationship to Megatron and Starscream. Their interactions always fascinate me the most. I love how your wrote Soundwave as something really depraved and mentally unstable, craving any source of control just to keep himself sane. It's an interesting twisted explanation for his loyalty to Megatron. I love love any type of Megatron/Soundwave interaction, but they're also my favorite pairing romantically. This story made me really happy. It's beautifully written. It's creepy and good.
Hannah K chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
*wipes tears from eyes* No doubt about it...that was the best TFP fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading! I'm just glad I'm not a Transformer because my spark would have burst from fangirl overload. Thank you...bless you...
TacticianZephine chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
-slow clap- Very well done.
SecretKeeper250 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Woah, that was deep(no pun intended).
Katea-Nui chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I like this darker side of Soundwave. So intriguing.
smileintothechaos chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
I love the way you write all of the TF characters. especially Soundwave **
JazzTheTiger chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
o.o what's megatron got planned for starscream? and how is soundwave involved? D8 Will there be a sequel/next chapter?
Shibara chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
This was awesome to SO may levels!

Truly loved your portraying of Soundwave and Megatron
Bernarde chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Great job. :D I liked this a lot!
David8-Shaw chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
More please! Soundwave rules! Tentacles~~~~
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