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Aqua Girl 007 chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
Wow, I feel sorry for Mana since she can't be with Atem like she hoped and is forced to marry Seth.
Aqua Girl 007 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
I like the insight into Mana's thoughts in this chapter. They seem believable.
Aqua Girl 007 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Honestly! You did a good job writing this in first person, you should do it more often. But agian, every story I posted on the site so far is told in first person. (I just have easier time writing that way.)
Mamoru4ever chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
T_T Why do you literally make everything so sad? ! Honestly! But still, even though first person POV is a huge pain in the a$$, you pulled it off really well. My fav part was when she said she loved him and still managed to laugh, it was super sweet and sad, which is a mix you do well... even if it does make me mad! ! Can't wait for the next! ! XD