Reviews for Magical Dreams I
Freyalyn chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
At least as good as I was expecting. Very well written - at no point did any syntax or dialogue or spelling jolt me out of the story. Loved the young Frank and all the little hints of the RL actor! I'm not altogether sure that the Frank you've written here is the same character as he's written in the series (mainly the lack of self-control, I think) but the story is excellent. Thank you for posting it for me, and I can't wait for the rest.