|Reviews for Distance|
| Xxstories-unitedxX chapter 25 . 2/18
Love the story! keep up the good work
| KyuuuChan chapter 25 . 1/12
to tell the truth, I was pity with Hikari, I mean, she realized her jealousy and feeling after Takeru have a relationship with Ayano, but that's what your idea, eh? I hope this will end as Takari lol
oh yeah, I laughed when you said "This is my third time trying to upload this chapter" actually, during this month this site was maintenance. Sometimes we couldn't look our story progress, sometimes we couldn't look our story's traffic graphs, and sometimes, you could upload your story, but it won't appear in the main page (this was happened in your fics and mine haha)
| the alpha phoenix chapter 25 . 1/11
It's good to see that Yamato is safe for the moment. I wonder what he is going to do now he knows the truth about Ayano's family. I'm looking forward to reading the conversation that I assume he is going to have with Takeru after finding all of it out. It would have been good to read Takeru's thoughts about his parents being in the same room together for that dinner. I feel a bit sorry for Hikari after she found out about how far Takeru and Ayano have gone. Good chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
| chromate chapter 25 . 1/10
Ain't sure why this update does not show up on ffnet's update list. I was checking my other settings when I saw that you updated this almost a day ago.
On one hand I keep wondering who comes up with the great name 'Mayumi' and her personal background - sounds like a genius move there. On the other hand I don't know what I should feel about Takeru's apparent intimacy with Ayano - not that I think it's not appropriate for their age for whatever, but that given Takeru's lingering feeling for Hikari, I feel bad for Ayano in such case actually for making it seem like she's just Hikari's substitute. (Okay, to a degree she has always been, but still...)
Speaking of which, where has she been during this week after Yamato's kidnap?
| KyuuuChan chapter 24 . 12/28/2013
please continue this! i want to see Takari in the end!
| KyuuuChan chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
to tell the truth, i'm interested with this since long time ago, and finally decided to read this
waw, i love this scene, jealous hikari hahaha lol
| appledips chapter 24 . 11/17/2013
Thank you for continuing a good quality Takari fanfic (:
| the alpha phoenix chapter 24 . 11/4/2013
That was interesting and action packed. At least someone rescued Yamato and now he is going to be safe. I'm sure Takeru will be at least glad of that ... although I can imagine the knowledge that his brother's safety resulted in a lot of deaths would probably weigh on his mind. It will be interesting to know Yamato's view on all of this. Good chapter and I eagerly await the next one.
| Digidestined-me chapter 24 . 11/3/2013
I really enjoyed reading your fiction keep going it :)
| Anime-Otaku1 chapter 24 . 11/1/2013
I like, but its really killing me when Takeru will end it with Ayano and get with Hikari.
| chromate chapter 24 . 10/30/2013
I expect to read something from a yakuza's POV, but I thought Yamato would make more than a cameo appearance haha. I kinda expected there would at least be a scene of him trying to comprehend the whole thing of why he was kidnapped and what they had done to him. Still, this is an intense chapter, which would have serious implication on all the characters. I wonder how the others, especially Taichi and Takeru would react to this. More importantly, Yamato himself as well.
| tudyjr chapter 23 . 10/15/2013
Well I recently starting reading this story and just no caught up and well it is very good. This chapter was a good and the ending made makes me want more. Still i do think it was a bit rushed for me, but still i enjoyed it. Cant wait for the next chapter, and keep up the good work.
| the alpha phoenix chapter 23 . 9/18/2013
It appears that something went wrong when I was posting my review for this chapter. I was signed in and all but for some reason it appeared as a guest review. Oh well ... my thoughts are in the said guest review below.
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/18/2013
Hmm ... I wonder what Ayano would think if she found out that Takeru had stood her up just so he could have a conversation with Hikari about a love letter. Hikari herself seems to enjoy mocking the guys that show an interest in her too. On a different note, I hope Yamato isn't hurt and that he can be found. Please update soon.
| chromate chapter 23 . 9/7/2013
I'll be honest in saying first that I didn't expect you'd update this - frankly, I thought you abandoned this story already and are concentrating on the two "Home" stories for this fandom. It's certainly a pleasant surprise, and certainly nice to read some Takeru-Hikari moment. As usual, you created a deep, still atmosphere that didn't require them to ramble on non-stop, but just a few words are enough to change everything. Takeru's blank face when talking about the love letters, for instance. Yamato missing is certainly not something I had expected for Takeru ditching his date with Ayano. Seemingly Ayano's family is involved, I wonder what this will lead to.