|Reviews for Mi pinche Parasito|
| Winterhalt chapter 3 . 9/1/2013
Ok. Please finish!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
Hey, pretty good story! So this is the sequal to Outsider? Oh and maybe you should work on grammer and spelling, cause it was kinda hard to understand. Though its sad when Jinx gets raped, overall it could end up being an awsome story(just work on spelling and grammer) So try writting more stories, I look foward to them!