Reviews for a version of nighttime
controlled climb chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Oh! I wish the site hadn’t restricted you from putting the blacked-out parts in! It’s wonderful as it is, but I would’ve loved to see the original. I really like this. I felt like this was just super duper emotional and if I were a better person, I totally would’ve started sobbing because it’s really just so beautiful.
Morghen chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Oh wow, mew. This was really amazing.

:O

I wish ffn would let you black out the appropriate parts because it does give the poem a different look, but it still is amazing. I love how vague it is, but it's still very powerful and moving. I love fluffy Remmius, but angsty romance for them like this is probably my favorite.

"he wonders about himself, too

…clever…

…angry…

…dark…

"no, not dark"

hope"

Those lines were probably my favorite. I like how you can see it as either Remus thinking about being a werewolf or even Sirius wondering if he really is different from the rest of his family.

:)

I hope you do more blackout poetry because it's really nice to read. (Maybe I'll try my hand at it sometime...)

:D

-Morghen
macdennischardee chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Remus/Sirius is practically begging for angst. And some fluff.

I love this so much. What can I say? I'm an angst whore. *shrug*

This might be stupid, but what is a blackout poem.

This was really super duper good! It had me tearing up in the middle.
lowi chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Oh, this poem was so beautiful! Loved it, all the way trough! :D

(just a question, what is a blackout poem? :S never heard of it before...)
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
really pretty!