Reviews for a version of nighttime
controlled climb chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Oh! I wish the site hadn’t restricted you from putting the blacked-out parts in! It’s wonderful as it is, but I would’ve loved to see the original. I really like this. I felt like this was just super duper emotional and if I were a better person, I totally would’ve started sobbing because it’s really just so beautiful.
Morghen chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Oh wow, mew. This was really amazing.


I wish ffn would let you black out the appropriate parts because it does give the poem a different look, but it still is amazing. I love how vague it is, but it's still very powerful and moving. I love fluffy Remmius, but angsty romance for them like this is probably my favorite.

"he wonders about himself, too




"no, not dark"


Those lines were probably my favorite. I like how you can see it as either Remus thinking about being a werewolf or even Sirius wondering if he really is different from the rest of his family.


I hope you do more blackout poetry because it's really nice to read. (Maybe I'll try my hand at it sometime...)


macdennischardee chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Remus/Sirius is practically begging for angst. And some fluff.

I love this so much. What can I say? I'm an angst whore. *shrug*

This might be stupid, but what is a blackout poem.

This was really super duper good! It had me tearing up in the middle.
lowi chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Oh, this poem was so beautiful! Loved it, all the way trough! :D

(just a question, what is a blackout poem? :S never heard of it before...)
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
really pretty!