Reviews for Hot 'N Cold
NotoriousNat chapter 18 . 1/11/2013
Love this but i think you should do a sequel of the next generation :D

abbyweyr chapter 18 . 1/7/2013
Best wishes for the contest.
abbyweyr chapter 16 . 1/7/2013
Nice wrap up. Enjoyable story. Didn't care for the torture, too much info. Glad I waited until it was completed. Yes, the grammar, catching typos got better. You had suitable quiet maybe even humorous spots to break up the tensions. I'll take a look at some other stories.
abbyweyr chapter 15 . 1/7/2013
Nice names for the twins. Nice to be one of each. Great that she survived and has forever with Edward and children.
abbyweyr chapter 14 . 1/7/2013
Sad that the Cullens are so smart but still can't figure out that the babies are thirsty. One of my sore points with the original.
abbyweyr chapter 13 . 1/7/2013
Well at least they are hearing the heart beats. Edward being his usual fear for Bella, no hope self.
abbyweyr chapter 12 . 1/7/2013
If she was still phasing, she should not be pregnant. Body treating it as an infection does sort of make sense. More drama now.
abbyweyr chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
Good for Leah and Jacob.
abbyweyr chapter 10 . 1/7/2013
Glad to be rid of the Volturi! Nice gathering of forces to overwhelm the guard. Timing good to prevent the rapes.
abbyweyr chapter 9 . 1/7/2013
Evil Aro. Hope he dies before the end.
abbyweyr chapter 8 . 1/7/2013
oh my...she doesn't know what getting into. Doing that to Edward...lies and physically hurting him... not good. So glad this is completed and I can keep reading.
abbyweyr chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
Well at least they see Sam's part in the fight. Understandable not to allow Bella back at La Push.
abbyweyr chapter 6 . 1/7/2013
oh...good that the Denali clan came. bad to push Seth to shift and expect him, Jacob and Leah to be good fighters...Sam being poor leader.
abbyweyr chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Sudden increase in the wolf population. Bella and Edward getting along just fine.
abbyweyr chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Confrontation after confrontation. Each side have a hurt arm. Volatile emotions.
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