Reviews for Between Bouts
kotomi101 chapter 23 . 1/1/2020
Well... I will say that this was amazing while it lasted but the insect is not for me. I only wish we could've got that definitive warning in chapter one. I won't say I'll swear this story off forever, but I'm out. I wish you the best in your other writings. This is a personal preference on my end.

For other readers that have no issue with the incest. The quality of the writing is phenomenal. And the story progresses quite well.
kotomi101 chapter 22 . 1/1/2020
Again, but as another job well done dear author
kotomi101 chapter 21 . 1/1/2020
And that is settled. Also liked how it was tied back to the statement about why she wore high heels. The attention. That's some good detail right there!
kotomi101 chapter 20 . 1/1/2020
That's stressful. Shego you damn temptress.
kotomi101 chapter 19 . 1/1/2020
Oh boy and oh no! The shoes are dropping. Excellent work.
kotomi101 chapter 17 . 1/1/2020
Shego fell asleep this time. Hoping for the best.
kotomi101 chapter 16 . 1/1/2020
It's finally been said. Now we go from here. Interesting. Great quality
kotomi101 chapter 15 . 1/1/2020
So my guess was right in its theme. Joss is a smart girl. And now Shego is giving voice to thoughts that she was trying her best to suppress. Now I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. Now I'm curious of when Ann will be told or interven. Plus maybe a some more GJ, involvement. As always phenomenal work dear author.
kotomi101 chapter 14 . 1/1/2020
Nice and hot, but meaningful. I was hoping Joss got a mention. I was worried she would have followed Kim. Thinking she was headed out on a mission. But the obsession is in Rom now so coolio. Things are definitely getting more serious for them. Kim definitely is 100% in at this point. Though something has been bothering me. Was Kim a virgin before she started being intimate with Shego?
kotomi101 chapter 13 . 12/31/2019
Their attachment to each other is close. I wonder how Ann is taking things. We all know she knows?
kotomi101 chapter 12 . 12/31/2019
Well written. Nice direction. Good plot
kotomi101 chapter 10 . 12/31/2019
Absent Ann?
kotomi101 chapter 9 . 12/31/2019
That was something entirely else. Interesting to see how Ann fits into all this. As usual well done.
kotomi101 chapter 7 . 12/31/2019
Totally going love. Go ahead and admit it love. I like how the conversation are becoming more natural and comfortable. Great!
kotomi101 chapter 6 . 12/31/2019
Ahh, I see. Was wondering if it was over. Excellent writing.
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