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![]() ![]() ![]() Well... I will say that this was amazing while it lasted but the insect is not for me. I only wish we could've got that definitive warning in chapter one. I won't say I'll swear this story off forever, but I'm out. I wish you the best in your other writings. This is a personal preference on my end. For other readers that have no issue with the incest. The quality of the writing is phenomenal. And the story progresses quite well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, but as another job well done dear author |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that is settled. Also liked how it was tied back to the statement about why she wore high heels. The attention. That's some good detail right there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's stressful. Shego you damn temptress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy and oh no! The shoes are dropping. Excellent work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shego fell asleep this time. Hoping for the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's finally been said. Now we go from here. Interesting. Great quality |
![]() ![]() ![]() So my guess was right in its theme. Joss is a smart girl. And now Shego is giving voice to thoughts that she was trying her best to suppress. Now I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. Now I'm curious of when Ann will be told or interven. Plus maybe a some more GJ, involvement. As always phenomenal work dear author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice and hot, but meaningful. I was hoping Joss got a mention. I was worried she would have followed Kim. Thinking she was headed out on a mission. But the obsession is in Rom now so coolio. Things are definitely getting more serious for them. Kim definitely is 100% in at this point. Though something has been bothering me. Was Kim a virgin before she started being intimate with Shego? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their attachment to each other is close. I wonder how Ann is taking things. We all know she knows? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written. Nice direction. Good plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absent Ann? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was something entirely else. Interesting to see how Ann fits into all this. As usual well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally going love. Go ahead and admit it love. I like how the conversation are becoming more natural and comfortable. Great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, I see. Was wondering if it was over. Excellent writing. |