Reviews for through the eyes of Mewtwo
Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
i like it keep up the good work
farla chapter 1 . 3/18/2001
plot seems good, but it doesn't seem will-writen. It seems to state facts, rather then tell a story. You don't know much about Mewtwo's thoughts other then its dislike of Mew and Humans. What is it feeling? You also don't know much about the suroundings as they are rarely discribed and then in little detail. And did you have to have all those extra spaces? About 2/3 of it is just wasted.
StarDragon chapter 1 . 7/25/2000
Bad grammar, badly written. It needs to see a beta-reader big-time.
Me chapter 1 . 7/21/2000
Not a bad view point.. though you could have filled that big blank space with something.
Protector of RD's name chapter 1 . 7/8/2000
ANOTHER Mewtwo POV? That's a huuuuuuuuugggggeeeee space there, kid, or man, or whoever. That's a big space. How do you know that it would make the story bad. You should have left it there so there wouldn't be such a big space.