Reviews for Monster
Shijaeger chapter 20 . 8/26/2017
This story was extraordinary ! the emotions...I cant even...and I loved the way you described their relationship ! uwu
Shijaeger chapter 19 . 8/26/2017
this is...SAD af...but I dont think you could ever change his mentality...
Shijaeger chapter 17 . 8/26/2017
agh,this is so satisfying...I love the way they cheer her up
Shijaeger chapter 14 . 8/26/2017
this hole I was screaming for Roy to come...omg...someone kill him already...
Shijaeger chapter 13 . 8/26/2017
how can you say this chapter isnt interesting? Geez,stop lying
Shijaeger chapter 9 . 8/26/2017
I cant believe this...kill me now,please...
Shijaeger chapter 8 . 8/26/2017
Geez,this motherfucker is a freaking goddamn sick dog...aaaahhhh
Shijaeger chapter 7 . 8/26/2017
I hope Garand will burn in the depths of hell
Shijaeger chapter 5 . 8/26/2017
Man,we can't get enough of team mustang
Shijaeger chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Good Lord ,this chapter was so lovely
Shijaeger chapter 1 . 8/26/2017
Gerand is such a freakin bastard...hope Roy will teach him a lesson...
Gomboc123 chapter 21 . 11/19/2016
Wow, this story was a roller coaster ride from start to finish. Great job! And it was extremely satisfying to see that asshole Garand get his ass handed to him at the end
Guest chapter 8 . 2/6/2016
Ya bakın valla sizin önünüzde küfretmek istemiyorum ama bu adam bir oç.
.SEN KİMSİN YA? KİMSİN OLOM SEN? KİMSİN?
Guest chapter 7 . 2/6/2016
Abiii.. ya sizden çok çok çok çok özür dilerim ama ben bu garand piçini sikertirim. Ulan göt herif sen benim favori karakterime öyle davranamazsın neşterlerim uleeyyn
KingHerod chapter 12 . 5/7/2014
Well, if you want predictions... Something bad happened to Merlyn. Maybe Garand himself killed her, or watched her get killed. Something inside him broke, and he turned into a murdering, women-hating bastard. Either that, or he was one all along.

The only thing I wonder is, how the Hell can Roy be this stupid? This naïve? This...well, forgive me for saying so...out of character? I like the plot of the story, but both Roy and Riza are quite out of character here.

Garand is doing something very, very illegal. Hawkeye knows this very well, and would also know that demoting Mustang without just cause is merely an empty threat. It is simply not how the demotion/promotion-system works. I just cannot imagine Hawkeye standing for this type of abuse from a man like Garand. Her father? ...Maybe. But not a man who plays such a little role in her life - and has for such a short time too - as Garand.
And as for Roy... He didn't get where he is (or was) by being stupid and naïve. He would never believe Hawkeye was hurting herself, and when they all know that Garand disrespects all of them, and Hawkeye especially, he would be the first one Roy would suspect in this scenario.

I just cannot see him being this...foolish.

That said; you have a good concept. It just needs working.
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