Reviews for Mobile Suit Gundam SEED: Dynasty
Patriot-112 chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Hmmm, nice! Well done! Can't wait to see more.
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Twillightfairy chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Good opening, strong, introduces the characters and team dynamics. Wrong word choice in several spots; too instead of to, witch instead of which, you dropped the second t in thought making it though; you also said that Ryu was 5'12", his height would be an even 6 foot(feet) or 72 inches if the measurement is correct, otherwise I'd say Ryu's 5'11". These minor, understandable, mistakes are what I found, corrections would be much appreciated.
DragonKnightRyu chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
And the Lord said Let the X rain all hell upon thy enemies while looking epic at the same time