|Reviews for Teeth|
| Whack-the-beetle chapter 1 . 6/20
Just realized that I never reviewed this, even though I've read it several times, because Jesus -it's hot! I also like the analogy to Alice and the well known warnings issued to every girl since centuries - be careful your curiosity does not lead you astray, lest you might fall...
| Jasmine Melody chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
I wish you would add more. This is hot as hell and awesomely sexy. I would love to see Sarah sign up for forever in life. After all. Forever is not long at all.
| moira hawthorne chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
| MizJoely chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
In spite of some grammar errors you have a very lovely style of writing that keeps me interested. Not to mention that very hot little scene you cooked up. Great job.
| ulan chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I loved their short banter and their characterization was so them, especially Jareth. Alice in wonderland, Sarah in underground the comparison made me smile
| J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
He makes social planning so awkward. "Have your goblin lead me to a dark place so we can f $k." Very classy.
Seriously, well written and good intensity. Love the concept of his teeth being his defining characteristic when she wakes.
| Taneva Rose chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Interesting. I found the last line curious, what exactly did you mean by it. I know there was supposed to be some deeper meaning, but I just couldn't quite grasp it. I love your Jareth, delicious. I like to keep hold of my runners was my favorite line. If I had one criticism it would be that I would have liked more sensory detail, specific smell, taste. Not metaphor necessarily, but you said feral smile twice, and used Other a lot. I would have liked to know what other means to you. Don't get me wrong this was a great fanfiction, far above satisfactory, but I think perhaps it could have been superb.
| bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
i don't ask for sequels but this loose end begs to be tied. so. sequel?
| GoblynQueen chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
i think there should be a continuation of this story. i really liked it.
| ashiri-sama chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Actually really like this story. I would like to see this into a series if possible. Great job
| alphabetsoup chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
I'm hooked! Great teaser! :)