|Reviews for The Wizard and the Lonely Princess
| SilverMidas chapter 32 . 2/12
Awesome story. Will be looking for the next one.
| Marcii Winters chapter 14 . 1/2
Okay, actually, this is literally the first fic I've ever read in the MLP fandom, and I think I fuckin love it omg!
Even if we're not really seeing the MLP plot in this fic, I really really love Luna and Nightmare Moon!
| ShadowWolf223 chapter 24 . 10/13/2023
…Are house elves homunculi?!
| maiqsmail chapter 31 . 7/17/2023
Nice fanfic on its own, but...
1) I would greatly appreciate if it would say "part one of incomplete (and abandoned) series" in the beginning, and not marked as completed. This is false advertising.
2) Having the connection to two powerful ancient rulers of another race in your back pocket should influence the narrative more. So far it's reiteration of canon but with "what if he had pony tulpa along".
For starters, his curse scar should have been closer inspected. And he should've been relocated from Dursleys. After he formed connections in magical world, discovered his inheritance in the vault and have had alicorns advising him, there is no reason for him to return to them after Year One. I see no reason why he should even return, besides "the headmaster of my school said so".
Also, pony princess is highly educated politician. No way she won't utilize the fame of a Boy Who Lived to help him more.
I liked how he heard about Sirius Black much earlier, this is one of those things where he could've changed the narrative drastically by using his pony advisors. Sadly, nothing came out of it.
This seems to be continuing in spirit of canon reiteration with pony magical plushie tagging along. Not exactly what I expected, Luna is more wise and experienced than that.
And on the side note, thanks for not sticking him to Ronald Weasley, I despise that guy.
Once again, nice and bright fanfic, thanks for ponies, but discontinued reading.
| maiqsmail chapter 6 . 7/15/2023
"I couldn't think of better way to introduce medical world than canon"
Are you motherclucking kitten me? They have had no contact with him for a decade and then there is a situation with massive amount of letters with no reply.
This would fall under Deputy Headmistress demesne at least!
Not to mention that Harry is genuine V.I.P. so no supervision over his upbringing makes no sense. This is why so many fics have Dumbdumb as either senile fool, well meaning control freak or outright evil scheming bastard. There is basically no reasonable explanation outside these three possibilities.
And the fact how Hagrid chucked the legendary magical artifact in the table after carrying it around the world the whole day only strengthen these claims. Either it was extremely dangerous and a stupid thing to risk, or he was a bait with fake in pocket and guards tailing him.
Frak me sideways, pastel ponies make more sense than potter wizarding world.
| Gerginscy chapter 1 . 11/19/2022
You mixed two stories in one good story. That is great.
| Gerginscy chapter 1 . 11/19/2022
You mixed to stories in one good story. That is great.
| Obsidianshadow89 chapter 31 . 5/3/2022
welp, good fic, could do with a revise but a good fic. thumbs up!
| Obsidianshadow89 chapter 29 . 5/3/2022
wait, was Harry called Hadrian at all before this chapter?
| Obsidianshadow89 chapter 13 . 5/3/2022
Question, Nightmare slapped Harry's wand into his hand to make it look like Harry used his wand in slowing Neville's descent. Then when Harry confronted Malfoy, Harry doesn't have his wand anymore. What happened that Harry lost his wand?
| Galidor the Negative Tangerine chapter 5 . 4/20/2022
Goddammit, yes. Nightmare moon marathoning slasher movies and Freddy lol. Love it.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2021
| dadg12346 chapter 32 . 12/6/2021
Loved the story
| F3nrisulfr171 chapter 8 . 9/21/2021
This is a really cute story. I find plushie nightmare moon adorable.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/30/2021
T-T POOR LITTLE HARRY CAN NEVER HAVE A BREAK!